Dave_Kun
I draw, write and just do stuff in the internet. Most of the time I can't think what to do with either of my talents.

  • Real Name
    David
  • Age
    24
  • Gender
    Male
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Damn.

This was genuinely surprising.
Dave_Kun
June 28th, 2015
I meant to update the rest of the pages as a batch, but two things happened: 1, all the pages rendered in a terrible quality in my attempt of making them the lowest possible for a website. so I had to re-scan and do the whole thing again. 2, I got a me a PS3 and i've been obsessed with inFamous.

prepare for weekly updates from now on.
Dave_Kun
June 25th, 2015
IT'S HERE! I'll be uploading the next couple of pages in a batch. then it'll go back to weekly updates.
World Fables chapter 2 is coming soon! I know it's been a while since the other one ended, but since Black Collar is still busy with her other comic, I decided to write up a chapter 2. been taking my time on writing and drawing it.
I love the symmetry in that first panel O.O
woah, that plot twist.
Dave_Kun
December 8th, 2014
@Disturbed Goth: Black Collar and I have talked about it, and we're not sure. She's focused on drawing another webcomic currently and as am I. However, we're brainstorming in the background on what should happen next to the series. So in the mean time, check out her series Volatile, it's great

so as soon as we have something solid, we'll announce it.
'daww, Finale already, Part of me wanted this story to drag out a little more, but I knew it was meant to be a short one. Regardless, this a sweet story. I am sticking to it till the end with ya!
The art and the entire feel that the pages give is amazing.

I am strangely ok with the story..... strangely.


+Fave

keep doing what you're doing.
Dave_Kun
April 17th, 2014
@CursedArtist: You welcome! Glad to be of some help. I tend to go around and provide feedback to comics whenever I can, haha.

So for a first attempt, you did good. You're not relying in too many cliches and I get how not planning pages ahead could hurt the comic story wise. So it's good to have an overall picture of what you want per chapter, or doing it the good old way and sketch each page. To have a basis to rely on. I wouldn't worry about the weak opening. Not many can tell a story right off the bat. Heck, some of the best stories start out slow and kinda boring and eventually develop amazingly. Take The Avengers movie for example. The first 40 minutes where VERY boring but at the end it was all worth it. So it's ok to have a weak opening. Just keep making each chapter bigger than the last you'll be fine. Plus, the beginning wasn't THAT bad. There are a million ways you can work with it. So relax and be proud of your work. If you doubt yourself it shows, so just be confident on the work. Loyal readers will read what you have to offer. In the end that's who matters, haha.

Also, I see you're looking for a co-writer. I'd be more than glad to help. So if anything shoot me a PM and we can discuss that there so I don't take up too much your comment section space :P
Dave_Kun
April 16th, 2014
Feedback
it's interesting, having a lot of fans and only a few comment. o.o

anyways, feedback is important in every creative medium, and that's what I'm here to to provide. With that being said, I'm sorry if I sound like a jerk. So let me begin by saying that your art is good. It's pleasant to look at, I like the way you draw hair, in fact I'm a little jealous, haha. So art's subjective and I find it to be good. While character designs seems to be very basic, it's good. You can tell them apart. Art from page to page is constant and even on the pages where you seem to lack that artistic spark (we all have those days, comics wear you out creatively wise)the art is constant enough to hardly notice. So good job on that! I see that you grabbed a lot of inspiration from Attack on titan, and that's fine. We all grab inspiration from somewhere. So you have the art thing down in this comic, I can only see it getting better from here. With the art subject out the way I want to mention the story-- the plot-- the writing. This is probably the weakest fort of the comic. While I get that webcomics are done for the enjoyment, that doesn't mean you can't ignore some story basics. The way the story progresses is ... forced. Things happen because clearly they're pushed unnatural to happen. Chase seems to just KNOW things. I get that the point here is that Chase is smart. But as we see what he thinks we don't see his train of thought. He just knows be cause he thinks it makes sense. That's not how figuring things out work on someone's mind. Characterization in general for this comic is very one dimensional. I understand that this takes time to set up, but with the events that have unfolded so far, it seems like these characters have to personality. Everyone lacks depth. So that's something to watch out for. Interesting characters are as important as an interesting story. Now as for the action of the comic. It's good. it's well done and well drawn. The thing to watch out for is WHY have a battle. so far from the 3 fights that there's been on the comic so far 2 of the just left me thinking "Ooookay. So what was the point of that?" Which takes us back to the writing. It all feels unnatural and forced. Also, the punctuation and sentence structure is a little off on a few pages. I see it as a minor thing since it's the way characters talk. But it's still something to watch out for. Lastly, I could see where you are going with is and my advice is: don't take long with the set up. You can explain things as you ago along and jump straight on the action. The flow of the character interactions also feel unnatural.

So again. Sorry if I sound like a jerk. I mean this to help you, not insult your comic. No comic is perfect and they don't have to be.

anyways, +Fave and hopefully this feedback was of some help.

P.S: I had written a much longer and insightful feedback but something happened and it didn't submit, haha. Here I touched what I thought it was the most important. anything concerning this feedback PM me or reply here. I'll gladly help answer any questions you may have about this.
@JeanDedeaux: Ah! great to finally meet you! and thank you!

I would like to know a little bit more about this facebook group. Sounds interesting, PM the link, I'd love to join!
I just read this comic today, I really liked it +Fave
AND WE'RE DONE!
This is the last page of World Fables!

However this is not the last you'll see of Jonah and everyone else. First off, I wanna begin by saying sorry for delaying a lot, and quite often not a whole lot of effort that was put in some pages. Drawing 3 webcomics really burns you out creatively, haha. Also, I was not able to explore fully on some subjects in this comic. I meant to add more emphasis in how the mentality of the Black collar haven changed after they learned about the Vine Warrior's tribute. There was a lot of politics I intended to add, but it felt like I was just going to drag the comic for longer than it should have. I managed to show a glimpse of it for a few pages, but not enough. I am not too sure when the main story comes back from hiatus but I do have other stories in mind. Originally, I had planned 3 of these. But the amount of time that it took me to only do this one would mean that I had to put other projects on hold. Anyways, enough of my rambling and thank you for reading AAAAAAAAAAND I may start another when I figure out just how much time I have before the main one begins again. Until then.

- Co-Writter Dave_Kun
Almost done....
I know the feeling. Usually when someone I don't like asks me to do something with them I usually say "Oh I'm busy" then I continue to lurk Reddit in hopes of finding something to do.
great art.


but this is quite disturbing and depressing to read.
Dave_Kun
February 23rd, 2014
Eh, I'll play the devils advocate and say that I'm glad they are no longer together. Cloudburn was a dick to Infninty.

People simply just grow apart. nicely done, as always.
Dave_Kun
February 11th, 2014
Sorry for the delays, I decided to take a bit of a break from drawing. Updates shall return and we have about .... 5 pages left of this first fable.
woah... this is getting good.