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I've been sketching and doodling ever since I could hold a pencil. I enjoy basic and very cartoony styles but can find enjoyment in all forms of media.
When I am not sketching I like playing video games, writing, making comics and listening to simple music. I am a restaurant floater who wants to become a doctor.
Be squirreltastic to the world and the world will be squirreltastic to you.
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    Neil Blue
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If you're talking about pacing, this scene is just fine.
I see you're doing the right-to-left format, which is fine, but it's also important to maintain the top to bottom format.
In your final panel, the text window is sectioned into two parts, but the top one really needs to be on the right side and not the left. This is because you have a conflicting draw point for reading.
Do you start on the right, or the top? The positioning of them makes it unclear because both are demanding first attention.
If it don't drip then you don't tip!
@ryank_119: Now you have to add this shirt to your store.
@JimLad: Oh, it's called Hollywood healing!
Did Mallory sleep at all last night?
This is my work from 24 hour comic day 2017.
The drawing was all completed within 24 hours, but editing took an additional 4 which basically only includes coloring and text editing for the sake of readability. Enjoy the adventures of these two weird kids!
Yes, she is nude.
Crap damn fart comes from a quote in The Simpsons, but I don't recall which scene.
I'm not sure if she had time for a bra either.
The names are Ziti and Rigatoni which are both pasta. Basically the same one too, only rigatoni is larger.
People reading the 24 hour version had a hard time with pronouncing Ziti, so here you go (Zee-tee).
A cookie for the first person who can tell me the inspiration for Punch Guys X.
And a cookie for each one of these.
"Men" she mutters in front of her son.
If a guy asks to borrow your clothes, you should always 100% definitely do it.
Asking questions is for dumb peoples. Are YOU a dumb peoples?
Anime trope I've wanted to try.
My best class was theatre. What was/is yours?
The king of time.
What could possibly go wrong?
The first panel can be unclear without context, so I'll explain it: They're watching a scary movie.