Enkida: nice use of colours, this page (un-texted) just became my desktop
Strawberrylemonde: Mako Poisoning takes awhile to develop (unless you do something stupid, like for example fall in the Lifestream) and from the sounds of it Yuffie has Mako Poisoning because she has been in the north crater only takeing a few days off every 3 months for 5 years and even then the obvious signs of it (mako eyes) have only became obvious within the past 3 months.
i havent played DoC yet but as far as i know they dont straight out say who Sephiroths father really is, except when Hojo claim's he's the father. But Hojo might be wrong as while Lucrecia WAS married to him when she got preggers, she was cheating on him with Vincent at the time.....
my guess though is Vincent is the father, and thats where Sephiroth got his coolness from
i think Vince is just pissed off at Yuffie cause she thinks he's going to die (the need for Pheonix) and that he doesn't have any happy memories..... which raises the question of DOES he have any happy memories???
i've been reading this webcomic for about 3 months, and have "broken the silence" (i might even post here again!) to say that i prefer this layout to the other one.... but it's your comic so draw it how YOU want to