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This One shot Manga has a remarkable story telling. It narrates the lives of the character's way of life, how they survive, how were they've judge by other people because of their social standing, lifestyle, and way of living. On this work, the only thing that ticked me is the late introduction of the protagonist. It may be a new way to introduce the characters, either way, it didn't go well in my opinion.
The other thing is grammar and spelling. Narration is good. It didn't make the reader get lost as the story progress. The Artwork: Fantastic. No too much Eye-candy, or any stuff to prove you manga displays more of your drawing skills than the story itself. You did this using traditional style, man I salute you...

rated 9/10