Sabriel19
Hi, well I just recently got into reading comics online.I am nineteen years old. I am a self-proclaimed bookworm. I just love to read and I enjoy writing stories, mostly on quizilla. I wish I could draw a comic, but my drawings suck. I can draw certain things like pictures, and if anyone wants me to draw them anything, just ask. I'd be more than happy to draw anything for you. Just don't expect too much, because I am not that good. I also am obsessed with everything anime, and I absolutely love singing. My favorite singer is Josh Groban. Well, thats just a little snippet about me. Lets move on.
  • Real Name
    Carrie
  • Age
    30
  • Gender
    Female
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Just thought I'd let you know, there are a few typos on this page, track in the first panel, and wear in the last panel. I love his facial expression in the first panel😁
Does anyone think this is strange? I thought he was all horror struck and angered by their flippant attitude towards murder. Why is he so willing to become a murderer now? Somehow it seems off, but maybe I'm reading too much into things.
I like the idea because sometimes if you only have one couple, it becomes stagnant. If you introduce other couples, it's like a story within a story, which I think is more exciting.
I'm sad to hear that your father's in the hospital. I pray that he is able to return home soon fully recovered. Take the time you need to recoup, and we, your readers, will try to aid you any way we can.
Sabriel19
January 3rd, 2014
I think I love the tree a little more than the building. I spent like five minutes staring at it wondering, "how come the leaves look so real?" That isn't to say that the building isn't amazingly drawn because it is.
This page is so cool. It's almost like he'd walk out of the screen(which would be awesome lol). At first, I didn't really like his scar, but I think it looks nice now. It sort of gives him a more human look. It makes him seem less perfect and put together, which I like.
i thought I'd let you know, there's a typo on this page. On the bottom panel conversation. Anyway, I really like your comic the idea is very original, and I can really identify with your characters. It's very interesting.
Sabriel19
June 29th, 2013
Yeah, I don't know much about birds. I was impressed with the other commenter's. The first thing I thought was "they're small, so sparrows." They're drawn really well though, and I'm very happy to see that Mr.curly man is still alive.
I like the last panel. It's kinda cool how their heads are suspended in the air. That makes me sound kind of weird, but the way you drew their severed heads looks really interesting.
Sabriel19
April 26th, 2013
Is he having a panic attack? That's kind of what it looked like to me.
And another one
This is one of my better drawn pics, although my scanning went a little wonky.
I Still Haven't improved
Well, I was really bored one day, and I like a bugs life, so this is the fruits of that
Sabriel19
January 11th, 2013
my user pic was something I googled at random. I suppose, in a sense, Botticelli's art is beautiful. Do I get a sense of awe looking at them? I'd have to say no. I prefer Michelangelo and Davinci myself. Their works of art I find awe inspiring. Onto your comment about flowers, what makes a flower beautiful? Is it this innate sensibility that humans have that tells them a flower sprinkled with dew is beautiful? I have trouble believing that because who's to say that literature or commonality isn't the cause of people to thinking that way. In this same vein, why isn't rosemary considered beautiful? Why aren't weeds? They are beautiful to me, but if they aren't accepted by everyone, does the beauty really exist? That was kind of what I was trying to get across, I suppose I'm contradicting myself so my argument is moot. I don't really have a mind for philosophy.
Sabriel19
January 8th, 2013
I don't think beauty really exists. Ideas of beauty are ever evolving. Whats beautiful one day, might not be the next day. Based on that, how can we say that it was ever beautiful? It's kind of that 'tree in the forest'idea. If it dissipates so quickly did it ever really exist. Peoples idea of beauty is also different. What I may consider beautiful someone else might see as ugly, and vice versa. That's why I say it doesn't exist because there are too many outside factors that influence the perception of beauty. Well, I'm a little long winded but that's my take on the issue.
Sabriel19
January 8th, 2013
I just found this comic and so far I'm very impressed with it. Your arts amazing. I can't wait to see whats next.
I'm defiantly interested in seeing what you come up with. I really liked this comic, so I'm sure I'll like seeing the new version.
Sabriel19
January 4th, 2013
I may be wrong. In the second panel I think it should be culprit, not culpable. Hopefully I'm not offending you by writing this, some authors don't like to be corrected.
I'm liking it so far, you really pull the reader in with those first two pages because they give just enough detail to get the reader curious while giving you a chance to expand to more pages. Anyway, keep up the good work. I'm eagerly awaiting your next page:)
Nishi-sensei's adorable, I love his embarrassed face.
And a cliffhanger, update soon. I gotta know if he kisses him. I'm rooting for a kiss:)