Comment on 47.3 Own of Stitch
Raiyo, 27 Jul 2010 12:12 am

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I'm halfway through the book now and it's awesome :) It gives a nice bit of perspective that is absent in the comic format.

There are a few problems, little things though. The gaps between chapters are about 2-4 blank pages on my kindle, which is a bit annoying at times, and the chapter headers while constantly placed for the first few chapters tend to find them selves oddly placed on the later ones.

Also, at the end of chapter 01, it says this "They reach the handle of their first period, Logic," however, the very next chapter goes on to say "Curiosity consumes her throughout the entirety of her first class. It's History,". Which is probably me just nitpicking but it's kind of jarring that early in the novel.

But other than that, I'm loving it <3

Edit: Ah, I see. Amazon services can be rather unhelpful, I know.

I think for the updates to take affect the book would have to be purchased again. I can check later by having it resent (for free) to my Kindle after any editing, but that might only resend my current version. (IDK, and no one really understands Kindle's anyway orz)

Edit 2: Ah, I just finished your book. Nice ending. I really enjoyed it :)

To be honest, I am much more a book person than I am a comic person, so this was a nice treat. You have a very pretty writing style.

Comment on Thanks for 400 faves! of Night Shot
Raiyo, 26 Jul 2007 03:17 pm

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Congrats of 400 faves. Aeon is so cute colored!