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maciapaladin
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    Michael C. Prokop
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Glad to be back! We have 2 more BlackWalker pages, then VeriasX, our original artist, will complete the chapter. We corrected some of the Act I pages, but the updated versions are only available via the Drivethru Comics edition. It's finally on sale for $5.99...
"A FIRST KISS" - ACT II, PG 20
So, here's a page. :D

~Mac
Vaeyen is strict on discipline, but sometimes lax on fairness. Plus, this particular professor is a bit nuts. We may cover it one day. ;)
Troll level Over 9000 XD
Dress Code Violations
I mean, she would be, but the staff at Vaeyen sre just so, damn, thrilled they can even get Whisper to wear clothes at all. The sheer number of times they caught her just casually hanging around in the buff...

Werewolves, am I right?

Lack of inhibitions comes with the territory when you can cover up with a PETA-Approved fur coat at the drop of a hat, but maybe Angie should learn some discretion in class. Now she got detention. Oops.

~Mac
She'd Be A Stone Fox... If She Weren't Already A Wolf!
Sorry, not sorry, for that title. But Whisper is beautiful by a lot of standards. And, we are seeing some elements of a budding artistic soul. So, she's pretty much perfect. If you can avoid being decked when you steal her bag of Cheesy Poofs.

Kyle returns to class, only to give the cold shoulder to our gals. While we know what Darlene did, why he's punishing our Angeline is as-yet unknown. Thank God I started inking this page 3 weeks ago. I was losing feeling in my fingers!

~Mac

Don't forget the whole Patreon and Discord thing. That keeps us alive! And right now? It's at ZERO! T_T
Ray... Ray? RAY!
So, Weiss is up to some fuckery, and he messed around with some of Maxwell Lender's men (loanshark and bailbondsman. It's a thing). What is that bastard really up to?

Also, OOPS! This page was supposed to go up Tuesday. Sorry about that. I just finished it because I am Six Shades of Lame. Blackwalker was WELL AHEAD, and I'm the one that crashed out. I already have a head-start on page 18, though, so we should be Jake for our usual update.

TALLYHO.

Also, Patreon, Discord... you guys know the drill. (Especially if you want more updates and color!)

~Mac
@GUIGUI: Maybe that's why they're getting their asses kicked in the game. lol
@The_Dark_Angel: You may be right. We've never seen her with no makeup before...
Yeah, I got lost on which character this is. Is it supposed to be Izzy? She has no star tattoo... *Twilight Zone theme plays*
Mistakes Were Made...
This villain seems really... "special"...

Whew! Second update ON TIME. This was one hell of a page. The edits were substantial because Kim and I scribed this thing 11 years ago. So what seemed like brilliance then... well, I had one job. And I blew it. The good news is, with keener perspective and experienced eyes, I was able to avoid the pitfalls in the final version. I guess it's ultimately good we waited this long to publish it. I've leveled up a few in editing stats. lol

The Patreon for the page is live, by the way. Originally, I was going to roll this into my existing account and roll with it. But I was convinced by Keith, Kim and a few loyal Patrons from "Pink Panties Productions" (huge "Ship in a Bottle" fans, by the way) that parceling this one out means that I can more effectively manage the rewards and incentives, and they are less likely to be lost. That, and you may want to take a gander at the heft of what we are doing there. In order to keep this team fully intact through this episode, and "Season 2" (which is a massive story called "The Seduction of Sandra Hobbes"), we need to rake in some dough. $1000/month to go 2x per week and full-color. No small task. But I promise, the rewards and access to the team will be worth it.

~Mac
That Escalated Quickly...
And here we thought it was going to just be your average, run-of-the-mill shakedown! HAH! Rose and Ray arrive in "Old Bird's" lair and catch him "interviewing new talent". Obviously, the girls at The Foxhole like their boss, though. You know the old adage "Don't shit where you eat"? Well, in this business, it's "don't fuck the talent". Also, I'm pretty sure Jonathan's ol' lady (the real owner of the club) wouldn't take to kindly to that. Well, unless she had a say in the selection. ;)

Also, a new challenger? Stay tuned!

And STAY TUNED, INDEED, MAH PEEPS. A lot has changed in three years! First of all, WE'RE BACK, GODDAMMIT! We have a new penciler at the helm, so say hello to BlackWalker80. He hails, quite literally, from the other side of the world. If you know anything about the world of nawty comics, you're probably familiar with his character, Reddish. She made a guest appearance in episode 8 of Peppermint Saga: Blue-Gray Rhapsody a couple years back. I did the inks on this page as well as the dialog. Does this mean Keith W. is kaput? Absolutely not! But we can't afford to pay him a wage resembling "livable" unless we get some help. there's a fuckton of links on the sidebar now, so make sure to whitelist this page in your ad blockers, folks. We have Patreon, Discord (where the Patreon rewards are doled out), and compilations via DriveThru Comics! (among many other titles in our naughty repertoire). I've also moved the Chatango to a position right above the comments, so don't skip either opportunity. And, as always, we need your votes to help gain us some free advertising. You may also notice some smut ads crop up. This is inevitable, as no one, single income stream on the Internet is steady. So, with that in mind, please do not only click on the links, but if it is of actual interest, be advised that I make money from sales there, and by proxy, our team benefits because I can pay them more, and buy updates more frequently. and I'm sure all of you would love to see this beast update 2-3x per week. Sure you would.

Ok, that's it for now. So remember: VOTE! PATREON! DISCORD! INCENTIVES!

Peace

~Mac
It is, MercenaryX. Next week, to be precise.
Well...
Not to undermine your defense of me and my addition to the story I wrote, but it's a little from column "A" and a little from column "B" in this case, Kim. I was attempting to convey that the life of a vampire has been left wanting for Rose and that in 500 years she really hasn't done much but (as you observed) "see the worst" that humanity has to offer. But, I'll admit to calling a spade a spade. Unintentional or even allegedly "well meaning" misogyny is still misogyny, and I may have blundered right into it here. For the record, no, Rose's life need not be defined by her motherhood. But as Kim pointed out, she was in a very bad spot here as the things she had grown accustomed to and comfortable with all came apart at once, to the point of despair. This new life gave her a shot in the arm and a renewed purpose besides just seeing things through the lens of darkness. It's awkward, and yes, it reads very badly. All I can say is: we get better. My only regret here is that since you chose to write in as a guest, MarlenaWatches, you won't be notified about this explanation.
Yep, That Happened...
Eeeeevry rose
has it's thorns.
Eeeeevry cowboy,
sings a sad, sad song...
Eeeevry rose
Has it's thorns...
I like diamond plate. (I got nuthin')
It's taken ten long years to finally get here, but we finally are in Act II of "A First Kiss". Kimberly scripted this in 2007 based on a story and characters I created back in October of 2004. I'm often amazed at how the characters have evolved in that time, and also at how much I've been willing to bend my ideas and concepts (thanks to input from both Kim and our artist, Keith W.) to make this more complete picture you see here today. I hope you all stick around. It only gets more exciting from here.

~Mace
Ok, kids. If you want to help us out and get some extras for The Lavenders, join Frilly Pink! There's a link in the upper left of the webpage here. ;)
It's important to note that we wrote this script in 2007 and have been steadily tweaking it ever since.
Flophouse rules. I'm out