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shadowlucario50
I like music, art, writing, and the sort. I'm unmotivated to do art, but I try to follow every Pokémon comic. Well... Mostly. I try to go for the Pokémon-centered comics, or Pokémon being the main protagonist. Feel free to suggest any Pokémon comics to me!
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    24
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Not a suggestion, but maybe some questions you may want to ask yourself to see where you're at.

Art
*What do you like about your art? What do you dislike about your art? Knowing what pleases displeases you about your artwork will help in deciding what you would like to improve on. Which leads to...
*What do you want to improve in your art? And more importantly, what specifically would you like feedback on from viewers? Do you want to know what to improve on expressions? Backgrounds? Linework? Artists and non-artists will have certain ideas that can always help you improve a technique or give you a new skill to work on.

The Q and A Section - These questions will be more focused on balancing between the comic and the asks.
*What interests you more? Answering questions or making the comic strip? Finding out what you enjoy more in these two will help out in finding a good balance.
*Do you follow a trend? In other words, do you try to follow a rule for answering questions and creating the comic strips? An example would be finishing one comic strip, then answering two to five questions, or finishing a Chapter and opening up to multiple questions at a time. Or maybe you're a free spirit and do whatever you feel best pleases you.

Story
*What do you like so far about the story you've created? What don't you like? Just like art, knowing what pleases and displeases you about your storytelling will help in deciding what you would like to improve on.
*Do you enjoy your story? This is a strong problem many creators have as they go along their comic. They may enjoy the idea of their story, but as they start drawing it, they'll find it's not to their liking. Which leads to...
*What can you do to make your story enjoyable? This point is what really starts running your creative juices. You may rewrite a few things, but you'll also have to remember what you've written. Since you're still in the beginning stages of your comic, you have a lot of flexibility to take it in any direction you want. Take advantage of it and think of the direction you want your story to go!

Characters
I've already seen that you enjoy your characters with the asks and the comic itself, so I only have one question here.
*How do you want your major characters to develop? Each character is an extension of one's self; a desire, a personality, an experience. When you're going through the story, you'll be exploring these characters, and you'll have to decide what you'll do with each of them. Find how you want your characters to develop.

Changes and improvement will come along the way. Right now, you've given us quite a bit to start with, and a lot of these ideas you've presented look promising. I'm excited to see how you'll grow as a comic maker, and I'll be silently watching this comic as I do a lot of other comics. Keep being awesome!~
@Row: Me when my escort steps on a Warp Trap.
Why do I feel the "pocket dimension" could be very useful later on?
@zenmigawa: Oh, I didn't realize that! Good use of callback then!~
The text is cut off on the left side.
Don't mean to be a Chatot and echo everyone's Chatter, but this is seriously an amazing use of animation! I look forward to seeing what you'll do next!~
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Making my way downtown,
Walking fast,
Faces pass,
And I'm home-bound.
@That1Geek: Hey, it's from Kingdom Hearts II, so it will at least be fairly comprehensible. :<
@I'm here for the comics.: A suggestion to enhance the final sentence is to remove "not" and place a comma after "beginning". Replacing "didn't" with "haven't" would also make the sentence run smoother. In the end, it could look like the following:

"Since the beginning, you two haven't spark even a bit of reliability."

Now to be disgraced due to posting grammatical corrections myself!~
@Jurmala: Here's the full version of the script, as interpreted by me!~

"Becuase I'm an earthen, too! Halfway. Well, mostly! No, entirely! I can just spit water too! But that doesn't make me any less of an earthen, I think. No one else in my old tribe thought so cause they're all silly, but I really wanted to meet more earthens because no one in my village knew anything about earthen life except for my parents, but even their knowledge wasn't as good! But mostly, I want to meet more earthens because I found an earthen egg just randomly, all alone! I knew that I needed to take it to the desert as soon as possible because if I don't, the egg won't survive, and I want this egg to survive! It doesn't help that a flock of Taillow are trying to steal the egg, but it doesn't really matter because I managed to escape and the most amazing thing happened afterward! I actually saw Rayquaza! The real Rayquaza! It was the most amazing thing in my life! I followed after him and I found myself in Rustburo City, and I never seen a city made out of stone before! It was really incredible! And the people there are really nice! This Dustox gave me some Pinap Berries for free, despite me not having any way to pay them back! And then I found myself walking through the forest and saw a rising dirt mound and that's when I bumped into you! Or I guess you bumped into me!"
If Option 3 is surprise farewell peck, I am all for Option 3! Otherwise, I'm going with Option 3, because surprises are really nice!~
Welcome to the thumbnail version of this comic strip! We hope you enjoy being part of the Thumb Squad!
Aww, her first words!~
Yes. Anyway, good luck with figuring out what to do!
Good to know this artist knows the true evil that is Wooper.
Huh, so the crystals did sink in a bit deeper! I thought it was just my imagination!