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@Flame Shadow: In terms in our time I see what you mean, but in-comic it hasn't even been a day since she's met Koko, we just need to give Muro a bit of time. :)
@Flame Shadow: Pages 34, 35, and 36 of this chapter seem to suggest that Muro is selectively mute or has anxiety of some kind, or something similar. She tries to speak on these pages, but it seems emotionally she can't bring herself to. It's not her fault.

"I can't get myself to say anything! I keep trying and no words will come out! Even though I really have to say something to them!" -- Muro's thoughts on page 35. She is trying to speak, she is trying to communicate with them.
@Guest: Keep in mind this is a Pichu (a baby Pokemon) that was abandoned by her family-- she has no one. She's in a place she doesn't know, people (well, Pokemon) are forcing her to go places she doesn't want to, and she just came face to face with a screaming Ekans (snakes hunt mice. I know this is Pokemon, but still). If you were her age and in her shoes, you'd probably react the same way.
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September 5th, 2017
Just read through this comic all today. It's really good and I can't wait to see what you have in store in the future! :) Keep up the good work!
I ship these two.

So much.
No... My favorite Nuzlocke comic is over...

This has been an amazing comic, I've loved it so much! It's clean, simple, and the characters were just so lovable and adorable! Just all the small details in the background never failed to make me laugh. Thank you for this wonderful piece of art.
The Pichu is selectively mute, isn't she? Physically able to talk, but mentally/emotionally can't?
-Xola the Elgyem
-Female
-Wears an everstone as a necklace.
-Her father was a Kadabra, which is reflected in her markings and moveset.
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I finished re-reading this comic for who knows how many times now, and each time I notice something that I didn't notice the first time.

This time around I noticed that I ship Lopunny and Mewtwo. xD
@Surfersquid: Will it be back in the future?
What happened to interpretive dancing?
Someone needs to give him a hug. :(
Just caught up! Amazing comic so far, and I can't wait to see more!
Stupid Ghetsis and his stupid Hydreigon...
Man...
It hasn't even been a month since I first read this comic, and I'm already re-reading it. I don't know why I didn't leave a comment the first time around, but here it is this time: This comic pure. The story is so simple, but what you touch on is so complex. The way you portray everything is amazing. Everything ties back together, even the smallest of details. The characters are all so lovable, and the emotions I can't even begin to describe. I always tear up when I reach certain parts of the story, the emotions just get to you. As someone who loves to write, I just love the way you've set up the story, and then there's the story itself. I can't even begin with how amazing this story is, but thank you for sharing it.
It's be awesome for Kris to go to Mount Silver, find the protagonist from your first story and tell her that it's safe to come down... That Professor Oak is long gone now... Hopefully.

What was Kris's final team?