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Someone needs to give him a hug. :(
Just caught up! Amazing comic so far, and I can't wait to see more!
Stupid Ghetsis and his stupid Hydreigon...
Man...
It hasn't even been a month since I first read this comic, and I'm already re-reading it. I don't know why I didn't leave a comment the first time around, but here it is this time: This comic pure. The story is so simple, but what you touch on is so complex. The way you portray everything is amazing. Everything ties back together, even the smallest of details. The characters are all so lovable, and the emotions I can't even begin to describe. I always tear up when I reach certain parts of the story, the emotions just get to you. As someone who loves to write, I just love the way you've set up the story, and then there's the story itself. I can't even begin with how amazing this story is, but thank you for sharing it.
It's be awesome for Kris to go to Mount Silver, find the protagonist from your first story and tell her that it's safe to come down... That Professor Oak is long gone now... Hopefully.

What was Kris's final team?
It's your boy... Skuntank!
Is it too late to submit cameos? If not here's a reference to one I drew:

http://11jj11.deviantart.com/art/Ash-s-Elgyem-The-Final-Battle-Bio-627429317

I don't know if she counts of "standing out too much", if she does then just ignore this submission.

Basically this Elgyem's father was a Kadabra, so I made her look a bit different. She has longer legs and tail, and slightly different markings, but other than that she looks like a regular Elgyem. In this picture she's wearing an everstone as a necklace, but you can just ignore that. xD
Hard to believe how far he's come.
@steelscyther_2008: They're the same scissors Silver used to cut his hair with awhile back.
@Guest: As I'm fading away...
Darkrai: *Coughs up blood.*
*Proceeds to beg and apologize.*

Now I just want to hug Darkrai! (Which is one of my least favorite Pokemon.) This poor little thing! He's apologizing because he's hurt!!! Victini can go crawl in a hole...
IT'S A TRAP!
Does your team have nicknames?
@LonleyWolf: Yeah, it's probably a reminder of what happened earlier...
Um... Does he see Clara or something? Or did Gamma say something that insulted him?
Rat used Sweet Kiss! Shockbuddy is now confused!
Darkrai was once one of my least favorite Pokemon... This comic has made me think otherwise.