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@TheJGamer: thanks! it's always good to hear support!
i made a thing since this comic is kind of inactive:
http://vgshenanagins.smackjeeves.com/news
yep we're doing the thing
and now that the framing device is out of the way, we can actually get started. read the rules to see how to submit a character. the first real page will start once there's at least 2 signups.

also there's mouseover text because it's funneee.

i am open to feedback on how awkward the comic design is.
@Smiffy SMF <3: i just check his profile every now and then
mostly to see if he ever gets around to updating his cyoas
NATURE: RABID SQUIRREL
FLAME: FIREWOOD MAN
AQUA: SURFBOARD WITH A FACE
ted... but angrier?
i don't get it, sorry.
the arms come out a little high but otherwise this is incredible, holy shit.
@TheJGamer: you applied as co-author for explanation unnecessary, which he posts on constantly
should've just had Kaizen transform into his ultra meta super duper saiyan form and delete the entire comic
FRIENDLY: ANOTHER WUUDLE
SERIOUS: DOING
good art (better than my lyle in cube sector edits, surely) but could always use some improvements:
* handle of the gun should be shown, at least behind the left hand.
* the right arm looks like it's been stuck onto the shirt rather than being a part of it, due to the outline "cap" at the left end. optimally it should blend into the shirt near said "cap".
* pants should be more than just two pant legs- unless ted is wearing a long shirt that conceals the part where the pant legs meet.
* foot stances are sending mixed signals, not sure if he's in midair or not. the angle of the right foot is a bit odd.

here's a cruddy doodle that fixes these specific problems, just to give an idea as to what it looks like:
https://s28.postimg.org/cit5bak5p/ted.png

also, the shading is a bit inconsistent- hands are both shaded, but the head is not. i couldn't convey this through my sketch.
looks like some poor sap's blue finger got glass shards in it
@TheJGamer: i'm not mad, don't worry. i don't mean to come off as passive-aggressive, it's just that this is a really good concept for a CYOA, and i actually want to do a similar take on it once there's no competition; but for now i just plan to go along with the ride. i hope i don't look like some kind of creep stalker either.
@TheJGamer: not to bother, but are you there yet?
sorry
i just couldn't tell if you were actually annoyed or if it was part of the act
calm it, i was kidding around
>ask the purple megaman what he's doing here.
just sent a sprite sheet! hopefully this will make the comic more exciting.
>the mettaurs call themselves "matteurs"