After the flashback to when they were kids where the lab burnt down, I have grown to really like your portrayel of Gary. Kinda want to take his side here. Weird...
Oak was perfectly executed.I was in fits when he walked out the door. Ha! I'm glad you gave Ivysaur eyelashes. I found it hard to remember she was a girl at times.
I like it when people give a character a vibrant personality, even if they die, like, two battles later. Not many of the comics do that. I like how you draw purposefully poorly: it reminds me of the earlier comics people did.
Do you find wild pokemon or trainer battles more dangerous? Wild pokemon have always given me the most trouble.
Wow. A lot has happened since I last read this. Sorry for not commenting in a while.
I can't help with money, but I'll support you by leaving you comments of praise and constructive criticism whenever I can. :)
Those mutts. They just won't learn until it's them in the traps. I'm half hoping their actions come exploding back in their face, but I'm guessing no one would like that except a certain *cough* salamander.
