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Kumoriko
Wah! I had to shrink the picture I drew of gray, It's so small now. It was much cooler full size. Go to my deviant site in order to see the full view.
  • Real Name
    Amora
  • Age
    28
  • Gender
    Female
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Kumoriko
September 2nd, 2007
Popuri is so ditsy it's cute. The background at the top is so pretty.
Kumoriko
September 1st, 2007
The shading you did is wonderful. Gray looks especially yummy. And the chicken, mmm, chicken. Actually no, after raising chickens and slaughtering chickens and plucking chickens and having chicken for dinner 4-5 times a week. I'm done with chickens. Which reminds me if you ever want information on working on a real farm go a head and give me a pm. Speaking of which it's late. I gotta go to bed. I read the rest of your comics tomorrow.
Kumoriko
September 1st, 2007
The characters tell a lot about the story without speaking which is a very good thing. On a slightly related note, it's best not to state your mistakes or areas that you feel are mistakes because it's often only you that sees them. Does that make sense? If you say 'the hands a f'ed up' then people look for the hands to be messed up. If you don't say anything most ofthe time they won't notice.
Kumoriko
September 1st, 2007
Nice set up to introduce the story. Good details on the backgrounds but I think Jack's pose looks messed up in the last panel. I can't place my finger on why though.
Aww! It looks so cute! I can't wait to read the story. I happen to like the coloring on this panel more than the front page. Hmm... Go figure.
Dream About Me looks cute, and I'm guessing it has a lot to do with Gray. Hopefully, because he's my favorite character. Your artistic style goes well with the game and the colors look pretty nice.