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Pokemon Fun and Craziness
  • Real Name
    F&C
  • Age
    16
  • Gender
    Female
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@Aura flame: It is pretty abrupt in the games, too.
@Aura flame: Don't worry, things will start to be explained soon.
Thanks for the review, especially for the constructive criticism. I know that this being my first (real) try at a comic with a good narrative doesn't excuse its faults, and I strive to improve from what it is now.

Up until now, I haven't even realized that the "mystery" elements I'm trying to convey are actually just confusing moments that lack context. I could say the obvious excuse of "it will be explained later", but I should try to explain more. The characters don't question enough of what they should, yet sometimes they focus too much on another thing.

However, the main problem that I don't know *how* to fix is the placement of the text. Since I am barely able to change how the sprites look due to how terrible I am at it, the character close-ups at the bottom give their only expressions of emotion. If I put the character close-ups and dialog all in one image, it becomes too crowded, even if I did increase the size. But if I don't, you still become disconnected from the visuals above by having to look down at the bottom. And since I lack the artistic ability to instead draw the comic, I have to pick one way to do something even if it it's the best.

Still, thank you for the review. Most of the feedback I get is completely positive which, though nice, doesn't help to improve the faults. After all, if you build a table that tilts but nobody ever tells you about that fault, you're just going to keep building tables that tilt.
@Shard: A *scorching hot* fight?
@Shard: Aw, there's no need to get *all flared up*.
@Shard: What? Are these puns getting *too hot to handle*?
@Snurple-the-Hedgehog: They'd better get *fired up* for a fight
Yeah, we were all pretty sure that Wes would be out there.
Just remember that nobody likes the freshmen. (Even if they do. Because high school.)
Well, that looked far too easy...
I think that they forgot that Pokemon fight each other...
This is how you make it very obvious that you have bad intentions.
Daaaw, Umbry looks adorable! (And actually way better with rings!)
Well, this just got real!
Oh noes it's the bad guyses
Ooh, I'd like a cameo! My character is Umbry, an Eevee who's Umbreon-colored.
To give Lombre and Butterfree some credit, they do look a bit worried in the last panel.
Jen, I'm not sure that stick is helping as much as you think it is...
Mercode used Surf! Every Pokemon fainted due to being slammed against the wall and crashing down on each other!
Something possibly dangerous beeping without you knowing what could be wrong? Go check it out!