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Lain’s expressions make this page. I love that she’s more excited than Briggs is.
Auldr
September 21st, 2019
This is an exquisite page. It tells us everything in their stance and expression. But the colour has kept me staring at it for the last five minutes. The contrast between bright and muted tones; Mike’s muted red to complement Luke’s bright green. The luminous space between them and the blue colour shift into the background of the night. They all make the moment magical.
Auldr
September 17th, 2019
This casual affection is, erm, touching.
You’ve done a great job with the facial expressions in every panel on this page. I particularly like the concentration in the last panel with the brows knotted and the hard line of the mouth. It conveys that Jack doesn’t like this but can’t work out why.
Auldr
September 4th, 2019
That kitchen. Cort is clearly coming to terms with living on his own (or not). It makes me wonder if Ian is more shocked by Harvey being in prison as what may be moving amongst the dishes in the sink.

And then there is the ring on the third finger of her left hand. Looks like Harvey took care of a lot of personal business.
I enjoy the story, but living comes first. Hopefully the comic will help you balance the difficult emotions that come while watching someone suffer when you can do so little. But let it be that, a balance to lighten the load, not a weight added to it.
Auldr
September 3rd, 2019
The lemon is a truly brilliant touch.
I’d say Lain has made up her mind if Aya gets the pizza vote after passing the ice cream test.
Auldr
August 30th, 2019
This is such a compositionally beautiful page: We have Cali moving from dark to light and Harvey moving from light to dark; Cail’s panels get larger while Harvey’s get smaller; Cail literally steps out of the panel border while Harvey disappears in the one before. The imagery echoes the change as well, with the bars of the jail cell echoed in the curtains and the background for Harvey’s panels and with Cail energetically putting his jacket on while Harvey’s hands tremble. The text tells us something, but it’s the art that gives humanity to the words.
I admire the sentiment, but they are in no condition to fight. Battle, forced march through the desert. These folks need rest.
Auldr
August 28th, 2019
It’s warmer if you *both* sleep under the blanket. Not sure about that arrow, though.
Auldr
August 24th, 2019
Erm...I think the issue here is that he was at risk of fucking everything else...
Good call. People underestimate the power of black and white. What matters in the end is the story.p and whether or not you can afford the work it takes to tell it. I’m looking forward to seeing it.
Auldr
August 13th, 2019
Still being a gentle therapist, even though his heart is breaking.
Auldr
August 13th, 2019
The hands in those last two panels are a metaphor for their relationship. Still tentative, particularly in public, but coming closer.
To know that you’d have to think Lain was an important part of the relationship.
Take care of yourself. This is a fun story, but it has to be fun for you as well.
At least she didn’t order a small.
I’ve enjoyed every panel on this comic so far. Please know that the story as it is stands on it’s own. You’ve done a great job with it and let us feel and understand these characters. Thanks for what you’ve given us. Good luck for the changes.
And now we get to the crux of the issue, and the beauty of this page as a cliffhanger. Did Melissa come clean or will Hayden force the issue by asking Mars to be his trofy? I’m looking forward to seeing this unfold.