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poyo i guess
You do everything because you're a main character, Keeby.
i JUST realized there's a typo in this page
"lat" instead of "last"

...i'm too lazy to change it
I was going to have the joke about Kirby having never learned how to read be in The Star Garden, but I didn't think it would fit, so I put it here instead. It fits this chapter much better.
I would say we could do a crossover, but I just started the next chapter in my comic. Maybe you could just make a filler chapter.
@Warpstar: That's why I named him that.
@Sudux: Not every page in this comic is four panels.
That background was really hard to make. I hope I don't have to use it again.

Don't ask me how the Waddle Dee he threw didn't get hit by any of the spears the others were holding. I don't know.
This new character is named Kilby. I don't know if he'll ever appear outside of this chapter. Probably not.

And before you ask why it's so dark, Kilby waited until almost everyone was asleep to go to Castle Dedede. Because of this, he doesn't have to deal with as many guards as he would in the middle of the day.

And yes, he does say "Nothing personal, kid". No, he isn't going to be my comic's version of Coldsteel the Hedgeheg.
this is the greatest comic on all of the internet
And that's the end of this chapter!
That was a really short chapter.

Now for the really long author comment. You probably don't care about this, you don't have to read it. There is a bit of extra backstory for some of the characters that you'll miss if you don't read it, though.

Let's talk about how I thought of this chapter. The idea of the Star Garden was from a chapter in Kirby's Dream Adventure. Apparently, one of the sections in that used to be named "The Star Garden" but was renamed, so I took that idea and made this out of it. I don't know how I did it. It took a while for me to decide what it should look like, and then I had to go try to rip sprites of Planet Halfmoon (it's boring, don't do it), but it resulted in this. I've gotten a lot better at writing and spriting since this comic started.

As for the characters, those two (I like calling them the "mother" and "father" of puffballs, but I'm trying to think of better names before I make them "canon") who live in The Star Garden are the first puffballs to exist in the comic. I don't mean that I made them before the others, I'm talking about what's canon in this. They were born only knowing Poyoese, but more puffballs they raised came back from the planets they went to and taught them other languages. They raise puffballs, who are born from the stars, and teach them everything they need to know. Then they either have them help them raise more of them, or send them to other planets so they can live their own lives.

Daroach and Dark Nebula were going to have more major roles at first. I'd planned for Daroach to appear in the battle against Dark Nebula instead of just four pages, but I'll try to give him a more major role in future chapters. Dark Nebula was originally going to appear in the Star Garden itself and attack it, but instead I had this happen. I think I prefer the way I'd planned on doing it to what actually happened.

And I feel like Kirby didn't do enough in this chapter. I'll make him do more in the next one. On the other hand, Keeby's become a much more interesting character for me, even though he hasn't had any noticeable changes. I don't know what happened.

Anyway, I'm going to go ask the people on the sprite comic server about what I should name the next chapter. At least I know what's going to happen in it now.
As of the day before you can read this, I am 14 years old.

...There is nothing for me to say that is related to the comic.
No, this chapter hasn't ended yet. It'll be done in a few more pages.
I forgot how much fun writing comics was.

Sorry about not updating for three weeks. Smash Bros is really good.
This looks like it'll be a really short chapter. We're almost at the end already, and this is just page 16.
This chapter has a lot of stuff from Squeak Squad, doesn't it? I guess I like that game.

Yeah, Dark Nebula's here. Quick! Go defeat him before he can become more powerful than Whispy Woods!

also happy new year
Sorry about not updating for 2 months. I didn't know what to do next.

I don't think this page is that good, I just needed something to continue the story with so I could make better pages. And in those two months, I decided what will happen in the rest of this chapter. I think it'll be a lot better than this page.
And now we introduce one of my favorite characters. I don't know why I like him so much. Maybe it's because of him being a Dream Friend in Star Allies.