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Assuming I understand the meaning of this page, I propose the following edits to some of the text:

THE CHOIR OF THE
MONKS
OF THE
NORTH

AND THE FINAL ORDER
OF THE KING TO THE
SOUTH

BECAME A SINGLE CURSE
teamunity
February 10th, 2019
Some suggestions for this page:

A WHIRLWIND OF MADNESS
SWIRLED AROUND HIM,
CONSTRICTING HIS MIND AND DESTROYING HIS THOUGHTS.

HE STRUGGLED, TRYING DESPERATELY TO FOCUS HIS WILL INTO A SINGLE DESIRE.

WITH THE LAST OF HIS ENERGY,
TRAPPED INSIDE A PRISON OF FEAR AND ANGER,

THE KING GAVE HIS FINAL ORDER.
teamunity
January 24th, 2019
@Hawr: The only recommendation I'd offer here is in the first section:

THE SURVIVORS OF THE GREAT SLAUGHTER
LEANED ON EACH OTHER
AND ROSE WITH THE REMAINS OF THEIR COURAGE
Two suggestions for this one:
THE KING'S SANITY WAS IN FREE-FALL

And this one is slightly the same with a more "poetic" feel.
OH, KING, YOUR SANITY IS IN FREE-FALL
STRUGGLING TO KEEP YOUR EXISTENCE
FIGHTING WITH ALL YOUR INTELLIGENCE
BUT THE END IS NEAR
THE INSANE CHORUS SINGS IN YOUR MIND
And here's where it starts to get bad :\
Some more text suggestions:

First Panel:
DEATH IS RUNNING THROUGH THE LAND
CITIES ARE BURNING, ASHES IN THE SKY
THE BATTLE CRIES OF THOUSANDS WAS HEARD ON THE MOUNTAINS
A MONASTERY STANDS ON THE HORIZON, CLOSING THE PASSAGE
THE ORDER WAS GIVEN:
"NO MERCY MY SOLDIERS, KILL EVERYONE THAT STANDS IN OUR WAY!
MAKE ME LAUGH WITH THEIR SCREAMS! GO, SLAY THEM ALL!"

Second Panel:
IN ANOTHER CORNER OF THE WORLD,
A KING REBELLED AGAINST
THE QUEEN OF SEDUCTION.
"DO NOT RESIST! GET
DOWN ON YOUR KNEES!
BE OBEDIENT,
AND
SURRENDER!"
A suggestion for the text:

INTO THE SOUTH
QUEENS AND KINGS
ON THEIR KNEES
BRING THEIR GOLD, BRING THEIR LIVES
English edits
To suggest some minor edits to your English text:

INTO THE NORTH
THE EVIL GENERAL MARCHES
UNDER THE DEADLY MIST
HIS ARMY IS HERE!
I'm sure this will seem great... until he can't burn the excess energy off, can't sleep, and starts going bonkers.
How could today possibly go wrong? :D

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