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@Annabeld: "and processed prison food" xD
"This is the way the world ends
Not with a bang but a whimper"
The page works well silent. Keep up the great work!
Haha, didn't see that one coming! That might explain why she can't control magic well. Two other possibilities could be the actual aim of the other one after Lone and/or some relation to the mysterious spear. If there's a soul in the spear, why not an extra one sealed in Lone, or perhaps extra souls hiding elsewhere? Maybe these were souls sealed away or something. We'll see~ :)
Spirit of Water
September 15th, 2018
Hey, it's okay. Not every project works out, and not every story is where we want it to be. Sometimes it takes many drafts for a story to get where we want it. No worries.

Best of luck on your other works!
This reminds me of a children's book and Inkheart all rolled into one. I look forward to reading more of it. :)
This had a really cute and fun opening. I'm looking forward to reading more of it. :)
One option would have been to take the camera and follow George, letting us see her trying to drag/convince Atty to come immediately inside. That would have had its own comedy. But considering that the fan club can HEAR everything going on outside, I think that this is the stronger comedic approach. The repeating panels make the page funnier, imo; it juxtaposes the unmoving (stunned?) fan club with the excitement/action of George and Atty's conversation, completely destroying her previous act.

Anyway, long way to say bravo. And congratulations on ten years! :)
No, but now I'm about to cry...
I didn't realize it until the final panel of the page. Beautiful~! :)
*drum roll*

The quest begins~! :D
Masterful. George's way with the fans, the guy hovering over the group... Wow, this page is an absolute beauty. :)
In the summary, you were concerned about grammatical mistakes, but I noticed very few. (I wish that my grammatical mistakes in my non-native language were as few!) The dialogue flowed well. As was commented by the first reviewer, they really are kids. I love it when kids in comics actually act like kids. :) I wonder if their parents will get suspicious when they're gone every day and all day, but we'll see.

Nice character/personality establishment, lovely art, nice flow: Overall, this is quite a lovely first chapter. It set the stage very well for the rest of the story. Beautiful colors, too. Very good job. :)
I just discovered this today, and wow, this is quite a story! I'm looking forward to reading where it goes! :)
Tiny little box... Bigfoot returning the cap? We'll find out~
Hm, that one's a toss-up, so...

I'll guess Hoot-hoot. :)

Welcome back! :D
Dazer's on a roll. And I particularly like the paneling of this page. Very lovely~

Sorry to be that person again, but:

"politcal" --> "political"
Lovely work~

I'm sorry, I hate to be that person, but when Gran speaks in the third panel, the words don't have a speech bubble. I wasn't sure if it was intentional or not, but I thought I should say something just in case. Sorry again...
Welcome back! :D Lovely as always~

Also, sorry to be that person, but I think:

"successul" --> "successful"