chah.. I hate these self bio parts, but I must fill all the blanks, I must! Well, no, not really..
Yeah... I'm your average college kid with his crappy to moderate skills in artistic creation, hobbies and such include Video Games, graphic novels (both japanese and american) and... Well.. I dunno, this.
Well, aside from the aforementioned advice about the book, this is pretty nice, the premise seems good, but I'll have to wait to judge for that, your art is presentable material (not mediocre presentable, but good presentable), so yeah, faved for surveillance.
Good luck reading the dialogue for the last panel, I had a hard time actually fitting that one in..
On a different subject, Malachya is another character that I enjoy drawing (even though I don't draw her that much), and she's easily my favorite character to write for, that being said, knee-socks are really anti-climatic for a God of Darkness, wouldn't you say?
Don't ask about that one, it's just one of those things that come as a given once you get to them, it's as if "She has to wear knee-socks, she IS Malachya after all" is the only way to put it.
And I ranted long enough, go ahead and try to read that last panel again.
If you remember the comic pretty well (or you've just been through the entire archives) then you might recognize this character...
Her name? Nah... Maybe next page?
Also, there's the colored first frame, I'll be coloring the first frame from now on, and I know the sea looks pretty crappy, but I don't think I'll be doing alot of large bodies of water in the near future, so just hang there.