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@Rjcmanus (New hunter vanguard): With my story, like you said, not everyone stays true to the tower-
But are they wrong to not have any hope left in the system set in place?

Sorry. I’m kinda throwing out spoilers 🤫
Well, with a unanimous vote of 1 to 0, I will be writing the story live.
So uh...
@Textualfish: I’ll collect responses Saturday (to give people a chance to vote)
New vote!
You’ll see what the vote’s about when you get there.
@Arcstrider Exo: if you want, I could help you out with some of your writing!
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@Arcstrider Exo: it starts about 3/4 of the way through page 24.

And hi!

And also (spoiler)
Perspective change! At the end. Ish
Check the google doc, part 2 is completed.
Yes, part three is being developed, and yes, there might be a part 4. This took a lot longer than anticipated, a lot less happened, and... I dunno. It didn’t come out quite like I wanted it to.

But anyway, voila! It’s out now.
@Rjcmanus (New hunter vanguard): I really like the story you’ve laid out! It pulls from both last word-esque lore, combined with a wackier story that lightens the mood!

If you want, you could shoot me over an email so we could talk about future story ideas and how we could improve off of eachothers work!

My email’s
I dunno...
@Rjcmanus (New hunter vanguard): political defamation and a heated and gripping debate over what you’re doing wrong and how to fix it?

But I can’t even vote yet, sooooo...
@Arcstrider Exo: I based John off of my in-game hunter, but the problem is, Oliver is a modified self description. So, technically, Oliver doesn’t really exist in the cannon Destiny universe.
On the contrary, I haven’t used my Titan yet, so I could probably go back and make it look like a potato version of Oliver.

What do you think?
@Textualfish: Hey Fish, it’s you from the future. I just want to say... yeah no.

It’s 6:00am now, and spoilers, you don’t go to sleep.

-Future you.
@Rjcmanus (New hunter vanguard): It’s not necessary that they hate us, but...
Have other things to deal with. But the problem is I SENT THEM MY FULL BIRTH CIRTIFICATE. One, they never fixed the problem, and two, they were REALLY quick to respond to my birth certificate email, but not any of the ones asking for an update. What if they pull a Facebook and sell something like that?

I dunno. Corporate America makes me paranoid.

Anyway, it’s 1:37 am, so I should probably get some sleep. G’night.
Screw it.
@Arcstrider Exo: I just made a new account.
@Arcstrider Exo: They figured out I made the account when I was 12 and locked my account. I sent them my birth certificate to prove I was currently of age, and the next day they sent an email saying they would delete the stuff I posted before I was old enough as soon as possible to unlock my account.

That was 5 months ago, and I highly doubt it’ll ever be unlocked.
@Rjcmanus (New hunter vanguard): thanks! But the main problem is that I’m fourteen.

But if any Bungee employees want some help, you know my email ;)
@A Bored I.T. Guy: deep.
@Arcstrider Exo: Thanks!

Did it almost seem a bit...

So, I’m kinda burnt out on the story right now. It’s going to be a while until it’s going to be ready, and I haven’t come out with anything new in a while so... here’s a substitution! This is a poetry anthology I did for a project im English. This gives you a little taste of more of my writing style with a few different subjects and points of view. Enjoy?
New update
I’m going to change the perspective up a bit. It’s going to jump from Oliver explaining the scenario, to a more detailed almost flash-back version of what was happening. (So that’ll explain how he remembers the EXACT wording of every quote. It’ll be like you’re reliving his memory to get a more straightforward approach to his story.)

The best way to explain this is like the middle of District 9. It starts off as a documentary, then shifts to a narrative standpoint for background and fine details.

Im making steady progress, but am nowhere near done. (And that’s without editing for clarity and continuity.)
@Rjcmanus (New hunter vanguard): *Chokes on water*

Woah, what?

I mean...