Comment on Batman of Tell me, Commissioner
SamOnceRoyal, 10 Sep 2008 10:04 pm

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Hm, Batman.
I worked on the next page last night, and, while it was shitty, it failed to save and was lost forever~ ;_; So I might throw an uncolored page at you and work harder on the next few. O:

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SamOnceRoyal, 09 Sep 2008 08:04 am

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You've got some problems with your "neither nor" right there. Mostly because you have a double negative. "You won't neither" is essentially "you will". So make "won't" into "will" and it it's proper again.

Also, the way you made him transparent sort of makes him look more like a hologram than a fading spirit.

Comment on Page 3 of Tell me, Commissioner
SamOnceRoyal, 07 Sep 2008 01:44 pm

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Also, no. Batman has not been raped. He's just had the crap beat out of him.

You guys know me already. I don't make these comics hyper-sexual.

Comment on Page 3 of Tell me, Commissioner
SamOnceRoyal, 07 Sep 2008 02:12 am

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Edit: With three obvious mistakes in one page, it was bound to be edited. Blood is there, Gordon's thought bubbles are set at the right opacity, and the non-word stipped has been properly addressed.

Anyway, Batman is a little nutso right now, if you didn't notice this.

Just Batman x Gordon? Oh, that's boring. Where would the drama be?

Comment on Page 2 of Tell me, Commissioner
SamOnceRoyal, 05 Sep 2008 10:53 pm

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