Glori
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| Gender: | Female |
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Comment on Eternal Gift: page 22 of MYth
Glori, 16 Oct 2009 07:12 am
Yay! I can't wait to get your next book :) I hope you do them all so I can have a little
MYth library.
Glori, 16 Oct 2009 07:12 am
Yay! I can't wait to get your next book :) I hope you do them all so I can have a little
MYth library. Comment on Eternal Gift: page 18 of MYth
Glori, 03 Oct 2009 05:59 am
The second to last panel would read better if it were to say "Does Poseida not have a
father?" or "Poseida has no father?"
The first would probably sound better because it has the auxiliary verb.
Glori, 03 Oct 2009 05:59 am
The second to last panel would read better if it were to say "Does Poseida not have a
father?" or "Poseida has no father?" The first would probably sound better because it has the auxiliary verb.
Comment on Page 166 of PikaSemeChu
Glori, 21 Sep 2009 12:28 pm
Setsuro: Why exactly do I bother you? Because I don't get off on the idea of a boy and his pokemon turned human getting jiggy?
Yassa does deserve praise. Her art is great, a lovely, slightly sketchy style with flair. I enjoy the art, but not the story.
KitsuneXKyuubi: Yes, I was aware of that, I've read every page of this. My point was that the characters have completely different personalities to their 'original' counterparts. Pikachu is a pushy sexual predator, basically like every other seme.
All I was trying to point out was that this story could have been so much more interesting, imaginative, original etc (despite the 'I want sex with my pet') if they had more of their original personalities or if it didn't follow the same yaoi formula.
Art like this deserves a great story.But then it probably wouldn't have as many fangirls.
Glori, 21 Sep 2009 12:28 pm
Setsuro: Why exactly do I bother you? Because I don't get off on the idea of a boy and his pokemon turned human getting jiggy?
Yassa does deserve praise. Her art is great, a lovely, slightly sketchy style with flair. I enjoy the art, but not the story.
KitsuneXKyuubi: Yes, I was aware of that, I've read every page of this. My point was that the characters have completely different personalities to their 'original' counterparts. Pikachu is a pushy sexual predator, basically like every other seme.
All I was trying to point out was that this story could have been so much more interesting, imaginative, original etc (despite the 'I want sex with my pet') if they had more of their original personalities or if it didn't follow the same yaoi formula.
Art like this deserves a great story.But then it probably wouldn't have as many fangirls.
Comment on Eternal Gift: page 12 of MYth
Glori, 18 Sep 2009 10:50 pm
Another lovely page :)
Nothing is wrong with your grammar or spelling, but the 1st and last panel would read more fluidly if it were *you're* instead of *you are* and *he's* instead of *he is*.
Glori, 18 Sep 2009 10:50 pm
Another lovely page :)Nothing is wrong with your grammar or spelling, but the 1st and last panel would read more fluidly if it were *you're* instead of *you are* and *he's* instead of *he is*.
Comment on Page 166 of PikaSemeChu
Glori, 18 Sep 2009 10:44 pm
Noooo!! Fight him Ash, Pikachu needs a bitch slap.
This comic requires me to forget all that I know about the characters' personalities, and that is hard, and their species, and that is harder.
Pikachu is really a giant yellow mouse. Ash's pet. If I had a pet that turned into a human and decided to come on to me, I'd be out of there pretty sharpish to find Horny so I could turn him back and give him to new owners.
The inner dialogue reminds me of a certain male vampire from a certain [shit] book, I don't know why.
Anyway, I like your art. It's why I read this comic. Pikachu is probably slightly too big, but who's going for realism here :) You may want to scale down Pika's hands though, they're bigger than his face.
Glori, 18 Sep 2009 10:44 pm
Noooo!! Fight him Ash, Pikachu needs a bitch slap.This comic requires me to forget all that I know about the characters' personalities, and that is hard, and their species, and that is harder.
Pikachu is really a giant yellow mouse. Ash's pet. If I had a pet that turned into a human and decided to come on to me, I'd be out of there pretty sharpish to find Horny so I could turn him back and give him to new owners.
The inner dialogue reminds me of a certain male vampire from a certain [shit] book, I don't know why.
Anyway, I like your art. It's why I read this comic. Pikachu is probably slightly too big, but who's going for realism here :) You may want to scale down Pika's hands though, they're bigger than his face.
Comment on Page 165 of PikaSemeChu
Glori, 17 Sep 2009 05:54 pm
Yeah, you go Ash! Pikachu and his pushy ways, jerk.
Now, let's just have Ash run off to tell Misty about Pikachu's sexual harassment, (yes chaps, Pikachu is an aggressive sexual predator) and then she can declare her love for him.
Cue; 1, 2, 3… Awww
Glori, 17 Sep 2009 05:54 pm
Yeah, you go Ash! Pikachu and his pushy ways, jerk. Now, let's just have Ash run off to tell Misty about Pikachu's sexual harassment, (yes chaps, Pikachu is an aggressive sexual predator) and then she can declare her love for him.
Cue; 1, 2, 3… Awww
Comment on 007 of Easy Way Out
Glori, 01 Sep 2009 10:11 am
I really, really like your style. I just wish it was in colour, the crazy hairstyles would
look even better.
Glori, 01 Sep 2009 10:11 am
I really, really like your style. I just wish it was in colour, the crazy hairstyles would
look even better. Comment on Chapter 6: Page 23 of Get Up & Go
Glori, 01 Sep 2009 07:26 am
This is his mum, I'm wondering if people think it's Mel...
Glori, 01 Sep 2009 07:26 am
This is his mum, I'm wondering if people think it's Mel...Contact Info
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Glori, 23 Nov 2009 06:21 am
Just thinking that in the forth panel Alexander's right nipple looks a tad bit too low. I don't know if that's just me.