Minor Catastrophe
| Real Name: | Bowties! |
| Gender: | Female |
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I continuously change this and then go back to read it to find something stupid.
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Comment on 121 of AwkwardRipper
Minor Catastrophe, 16 2 09 1:08 pm
Sorry to say, but it's too dark, now.
I think the bright red made the pages more interesting. It was like, "BAM. Blood." and I liked that.
Minor Catastrophe, 16 2 09 1:08 pm
Sorry to say, but it's too dark, now. I think the bright red made the pages more interesting. It was like, "BAM. Blood." and I liked that.
Comment on Page 173 of God's Story
Minor Catastrophe, 20 Jan 2010 08:52 pm
Okay, I agree with the anatomy statement, but your saying of, "I'm not trying to be rude." was an epic fail. There are nicer ways to say people need to work on things rather than telling them it's "atrocious."
Minor Catastrophe, 20 Jan 2010 08:52 pm
Okay, I agree with the anatomy statement, but your saying of, "I'm not trying to be rude." was an epic fail. There are nicer ways to say people need to work on things rather than telling them it's "atrocious."Comment on Ch 3: p93 of Acid Monday
Minor Catastrophe, 10 Apr 2009 06:34 pm
You never fail to make me laugh.
Srsly.
Minor Catastrophe, 10 Apr 2009 06:34 pm
You never fail to make me laugh. Srsly.
Comment on Ch 3: p91 of Acid Monday
Minor Catastrophe, 29 Mar 2009 02:23 am
Lol. You can always depend on Minnesota to have crappy April weather. It'll be 60 degrees out for three days and we all think it's Spring. Then it snows. For the 39527839 time.
Great page~
Minor Catastrophe, 29 Mar 2009 02:23 am
Lol. You can always depend on Minnesota to have crappy April weather. It'll be 60 degrees out for three days and we all think it's Spring. Then it snows. For the 39527839 time. Great page~
Comment on Part 2 - page 33 of A Song for Elise
Minor Catastrophe, 22 Mar 2009 09:35 pm
D:
I actually like the grammatical errors (and I'm a grammar nazi), it gives the page a little more personality than just having it bland and correct and stiff.
If I was writing my suicide note, or goodbye letter, I sure as hell wouldn't care about grammar or spelling.
Minor Catastrophe, 22 Mar 2009 09:35 pm
D:I actually like the grammatical errors (and I'm a grammar nazi), it gives the page a little more personality than just having it bland and correct and stiff.
If I was writing my suicide note, or goodbye letter, I sure as hell wouldn't care about grammar or spelling.
Comment on Fanart - BlueRoses of Lost Love
Minor Catastrophe, 24 Feb 2009 11:41 pm
Holy Long Comment, Batman!
So, I read through this, and I really like it, but I must comment on your writing.
Don't take this as like, "RAWR YOUR WRITING SUCKS." because it doesn't...at all. I'd just like to make a few suggestions to make it sound a little better? (Not that I know everything. I'm just a writer, too.)
Try showing more instead of telling. Show actions through words instead of telling what happens directly...add more description, I suppose you'd call it. Like, "A smile bled onto her face, a sinister something that would make the craziest of asylum patients jealous." Rather than, "She sinisterly smiled." Or something.
Maybe use a thesaurus once in a while? The word choice isn't poor, or anything, it would just make it sound a little better if a few overly smartical words were thrown in. x3
Your grammar is good. Goodgoodgood.
I think that's it...
(Again, just trying to help. :D )
Best wishes and get better soon, m'dear!
Minor Catastrophe, 24 Feb 2009 11:41 pm
Holy Long Comment, Batman!So, I read through this, and I really like it, but I must comment on your writing.
Don't take this as like, "RAWR YOUR WRITING SUCKS." because it doesn't...at all. I'd just like to make a few suggestions to make it sound a little better? (Not that I know everything. I'm just a writer, too.)
Try showing more instead of telling. Show actions through words instead of telling what happens directly...add more description, I suppose you'd call it. Like, "A smile bled onto her face, a sinister something that would make the craziest of asylum patients jealous." Rather than, "She sinisterly smiled." Or something.
Maybe use a thesaurus once in a while? The word choice isn't poor, or anything, it would just make it sound a little better if a few overly smartical words were thrown in. x3
Your grammar is good. Goodgoodgood.
I think that's it...
(Again, just trying to help. :D )
Best wishes and get better soon, m'dear!
Comment on Ch 2 pg 16 of UnNatural Order
Minor Catastrophe, 12 Nov 2008 11:29 pm
In the first three comments, the first two words were "Oh noes!"
Observation.
My turn.
OHNOEZ.
NOT THE SCARF.
Minor Catastrophe, 12 Nov 2008 11:29 pm
In the first three comments, the first two words were "Oh noes!" Observation.
My turn.
OHNOEZ.
NOT THE SCARF.
Comment on Intro - 04 of Target Practice!
Minor Catastrophe, 20 Aug 2008 02:51 pm
I was like, "'Last dinner'? What? OHJEEZ."
Noes! NOT THE KITTTYYY!
Minor Catastrophe, 20 Aug 2008 02:51 pm
I was like, "'Last dinner'? What? OHJEEZ." Noes! NOT THE KITTTYYY!
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