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Is poor Wang still alive?
A girly computer that has been kinked by her maker. Nice touch.
I certainly like the build of tension and excitement. I think you could of played more on the 'hull integrity', pushed the tension further as you have done such a great job already.
I do like the build up of activity. The show of people heading to their stations ready for action.

I'm not sure what was meant by 'but that's an outdated issue of Yaoi Manga'. I'm not very well versed on manga and its genres.
fladam
September 30th, 2008
Oh dear
That's blown his chances.
fladam
September 30th, 2008
Why doesn't she react? Or perhaps she does on the next page.
fladam
September 30th, 2008
I can certainly appreciate that it must of taken you an age to pack in all the detail in the upper panel. Great artwork, the effort really shows.
fladam
September 30th, 2008
The story telling device you use here is very cool.
fladam
September 30th, 2008
Oh my
Hahaha, there was me innocently thinking that this was going to be a sensitive romance.

Great art.
fladam
September 30th, 2008
Lovely
The art so far has been fantastic. A lovely feeling of romance.