Comment on wtf?? of Pandora's Pendant
Goddess_of_Critique, 12 Nov 2007 05:05 am

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ONION BALLOON ;_;

Comment on Chapter 1: Page 7 of Vampire Overlords
Goddess_of_Critique, 26 Oct 2007 06:08 am

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Panel1 [no text]
Panel2:
- "Heh~!" [shout]
~sound~ (sorry can't work it out)
- "Idiot! Your death day has arrived!"

Comment on Chapter 1: Page 5 of Vampire Overlords
Goddess_of_Critique, 26 Oct 2007 05:50 am

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Panel1:
- "What are these people doing?"
Panel2:
- "Huh..."
Panel3:
- "!?" (you clearly needed tha bit translated)

Comment on Chapter 1: Page 4 of Vampire Overlords
Goddess_of_Critique, 26 Oct 2007 05:42 am

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I got a few nice comments about my translations so here's another one.

Panel1: "Vampire's Biography"
Panel2:
- "The books on this shelf are all very old. Do you like this book? If you like it I can give it to you."
- "R-really? Thankyou!"
Panel3:
- [sign] "an hour later"
- "Are you sure you don't want me to walk to home? It's can be very dangerous for a girl to be alone."
- "It's okay, sir. I'll be careful."
Panel4:
- "The rain has almost stopped anyway..."
Panel5:
- "Huh..."

Comment on 1st sumi-e page of Pandora's Pendant
Goddess_of_Critique, 26 Oct 2007 05:12 am

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OMG the shading looks so good. What happened to right to left though?