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I had actually re-read from the start of the fire when you updated the last page. I think a lot of the confusion comes from the time between pages, rather than the writing or panels being confusing. At first I was pretty confused, but when I re-read the pages all together, what was happening was a lot clearer to me.

So I just wanted to say that, in case you were worried people weren't understanding it because of how you wrote it. I really think less people would have been confused if everything was read together, and thats the only issue. Your storytelling is good.
I just caught up last week and had been looking forward to an update all week!

I've really been enjoying your storytelling and art!
Hm, this page seems to remind me of a little tip I saw on tumblr... just keep adding black! ;D

However it is nice on the lighting, I'm just teasing.

I actually don't know the traditional version of this story! A friend brought it up for some reason or another, and I was like "Don't spoil it!" Even if it is very different. I wanna read that after this.
Wow, quite a steady hand while drunk.
@Guest: No, you're just reading it on the wrong path.

"What is this?"
"it LOOKS like ___"
She's just saying a really long sentence that's a little hard to follow without speech emphasis.
Poor guards... Sorta. They look a little uh... not so friendly.
Naw, he'll probably get a hug...
I'm sure Toby looks forward to that day.
March 29th, 2015
Hey, good on you for keeping this up until the end. Not many people do that, and I know it can be hard, but I'm glad you had the determination to see it through. You can see your improvement from the beginning of this project, and no doubt you will only continue to grow if you stay on this path. You should be proud of yourself.

Thanks for a fun read, as well. :]
March 21st, 2015
@kj tower:

About same as Rabbit, but you just said you like them happy which is great. :]
March 19th, 2015
You consistently worry me. ._ .
January 23rd, 2015
Wow, and here I was thinking he used all his energy and lost his memory.

This is a much nicer outcome, haha.
January 22nd, 2015
... :[
November 5th, 2014
And then Pause, the superhero is born.

He just needs his cool new costume.
September 13th, 2014
You did really well with his face saying more than he was, haha.
July 13th, 2014
@IsaacCraveFries: It's all in the sparkles.
June 28th, 2014
I figured the brother was lying, though I'd totally forgotten about the glasses incident...

Imagine how hard it would be to return to exactly the same spot!
This chick is a lot more sociable than I had expected.

He can't go letting ultra ball gal down either, now. He has a mission.
I tend to like overdramatic anything...
You know one thing you've done really well here is give the impression of the headachy/blinded-sore-eyes feeling he's got going on.

At least to me, that translates really well.