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One day I'll make something cool.
@Hokova: At least he's not hungover :D?
@Oly-RRR: I was going to have a short bit in chapter 5 where Roy got invited out for a drink (but refused) and decided not to do it without even considering the effect it would've had on this scene. I'm glad I didn't, oops 8D
@JoKeR: That's why I only did it as a joke xP
@kayotics: Some cliches are cliches because they work 8]
Someone had a fun night.

I half-jokingly thought of "censoring" the middle panel, and the TWC incentive is a couple of silly attempts at that.
Congrats on another finished chapter :D
March 14th, 2018
@Oly-RRR: Aaaaaall the guilt-trips! This was a long break. I don't feel too bad though, it was a good break, and I had a loooot of writing to do. Still do :T
How does this not have more readers :V
The unsettling atmosphere in this comic is so great.

I love the changing art styles, and especially the one for this chapter. I had a lot of trouble parsing chapter 2 though, since that style was so rough. It looked really cool but got in the way of reading for me.
March 14th, 2018
I got annoyed waiting for update time, so here's a slightly early page. Dutch angles are always a good sign, right? ...though I think this one goes a bit beyond a Dutch angle.

If you're using a screen you can't easily rotate, or if you just want to support this comic, you can vote on TWC and see a rotated version of this page.
March 7th, 2018
@Sage: The word is made up for this comic, and the creatures it names are what you see. I'd rather let the comic show what they are than explain it here :D
It's lovely <3 I love your use of bright colours. So easy to make them blinding but they look good when you do it.

Dumb nitpick: I think the step on the "P" should be longer, I keep thinking the title says "SOSO" :'D
@gutache: You should! You could also use the chapter 2 cover or some other existing art, it's better than nothing, even if it's not representative of the whole comic :D
You should upload a cover for this comic so that it shows up on the front page and in searches D: People are missing out!
I'd been reading this comic because the description intrigued me. Thanks to this page, I'm now reading this comic for Alexander.
@Indagold: You seem to have cropped out the first half of this page when you edited the two town panels.
The edit with the first village panel is a clever one, but the granny's still giant in the second panel. I don't think it's really worth editing though, since it doesn't make the page unreadable. Just something to be mindful of for future pages :D
@Indagold: You wouldn't have to paint it out, since you'd just draw the characters over it. That's the benefit of using a stick over a more complex model.
But yeah, it's likely not be worth the effort, especially if you stay mindful of the scale issues. The stick is only worth doing if you have difficulty keeping the scale consistent otherwise.
Ooh, is she hiding her identity from the granny?

The scale of Yuna to the environments seems to change from panel to panel.

For the panels with 3D backgrounds, I recommend creating a Yuna-height stick to put in the 3D scenes where she's meant to be, and use that as a guide. Since you'd be drawing over the reference sticks, you don't have to worry about getting rid of them after rendering.
On top of helping with consistency, it would help avoid perspective issues like in the first town panel, where Yuna is as tall as a door and the granny would be able to peek through the upper windows if she got up ;D

For the panels where you don't use 3D, there's no easy method, but just being mindful of potential scale issues can go a long way. The crenellations on Yuna's tower in particular seem to be a problem. If you decide how large they are relative to Yuna, it should be much easier to keep them consistent, even when Yuna isn't right next to them.
February 22nd, 2018
@kayotics: Thank you <3!

I've fallen in love with B&W over the course of working on this thing, I'm going to miss it when I'm doing my next thing D8
February 21st, 2018
@Oly-RRR: You click her right boob, clearly ;D

And good observations :F!
February 21st, 2018
@Glueckskeks: That's a good way to look at it!