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I'm a college grad who like traditional table top rpgs, anime, My Little Pony Friendship is Magic.
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    Ben
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    31
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If one monster got into the city chances are more did as well.
I'm pretty sure pulling a stunt like that is cheating, and if not it needs to be.
dracone
October 11th, 2017
A valid question
Her parents are known criminals, she fights crime as as masked vigilante, and her default reaction to a surprise is to make a go at the limbs. And this guy thinks it's a good idea to sneak up on her from behind, he's more likely to get hurt.
Everyone needs a friend like this. The one who says that panicking is going to solve anything and suggests putting that energy and time to better use.
dracone
September 30th, 2017
Okay, that was a pretty badass entrance.
dracone
September 30th, 2017
Fun fact, "Orichalcon" which is also known as Orichalcum really does exist, just not in the way that it does in fantasy settings http://www.dictionary.com/browse/orichalcum?s=t
dracone
September 30th, 2017
Noticed another missing apostrophe, in the thought bubble between the last 2 panels. Might be a good idea to go through all pages that you have up so far to see if you can spot any errors.
dracone
September 30th, 2017
@Maro-King: Glad I could help, I'm enjoying the story so far. Also, I kind of want to play around in it a bit, I'm a bit of an RPG fan.
dracone
September 30th, 2017
Wearing things like hoods in close quarter combat, very bad idea. Wearing hoods in ranged combat, not advised but useful depending on the environment and colors of the garments you are wearing.
dracone
September 30th, 2017
Just found the story earlier today, noticed a slight error in panel 2. You have the word as a plural form, you need an apostrophe before the s to make it possessive.
dracone
September 28th, 2017
Looks like he's going to be using setting 4. Man, he's gonna be drained after this fight. Also, he's probably going to be putting it through a massive redesign after all this. Also, this http://outlawstar.wikia.com/wiki/Caster
dracone
September 28th, 2017
Noticed a misspelling there, you said "loose him" common mistake that just requires you to drop one of the o's
dracone
September 28th, 2017
That looks like a critical hit, if not a death shot
dracone
September 25th, 2017
I have a feeling he's going to have slightly better results than last time.
Rule one of fighting super villains, always keep an eye on them, even when you're sure they're incapacitated. Rule 2 of fighting super villains, never turn your back to them, especially if you're sure they're no longer a threat. Rule 3 of fighting super villains, always assume the villain is a threat, even when they are incapacitated or incarcerated. Rule 4 of fighting super villains, double check on rules one through three.

Please note this not an official list, it's just a pragmatic list I came up with some time ago. And that's only 1 through 4 anyway
dracone
September 24th, 2017
A little anticlimactic there. They need some help, in particular a Tank to draw the monster's attention.
dracone
September 23rd, 2017
Just because it's an idea doesn't mean it's a good one, this has "bad idea" written all over it.
Some people can't take a hint. And others just have trouble reading cues. Which is he?
dracone
September 23rd, 2017
The final panel looks like a lead up to a badass moment.