ashes2steel
I live a life of delusions,
A Life of Gray, Ash and Steel.
A Fusion of Crimson Wrath and Azure Sadness

I'm the scars that won't ever heal.
I'm the memories that won't slip away.
I'm the hurt that won't ever fade.
I'm the one that you cannot save.

The only way my wounds can heal
Is if my ashes turn to steel.
ashes2steel
January 5th, 2011
Yeah, I know. The comic I had in the first Gaiga was a pathetic attempt at action >3< I understand your pain! But you'll get better, don't worry. Your skills improve at a beastly rate, I have no doubt you'll get to where you want to be.
ashes2steel
January 5th, 2011
No problem, I understand :)
ashes2steel
January 5th, 2011
I don't get it - what does she have to GAIN, or to LOSE? And the mechanizations of this malfunctioning Santa suit completely ELUDE me!

o3o *blinks*

*gets stuffed under bed*

Lol scotty :P I like it - I'm sure when the time comes and you make it into a series it'll be up to snuff! \o3o/

Psst, just don't tell Moose you killed a moose in your comic :U lol
ashes2steel
January 5th, 2011
That was freaky o___o

I would say add more detail to the whole cracking head thing. But I'm not too sure how much gore you planned on putting in here -3- but yush, freaky~ \o3o/
ashes2steel
December 17th, 2010
my philosophy on toning is "the less clutter, the better." Honestly, I think it looks fine. I'm not that big on using tones to shadow, however - I usually use tones just to suggest different colors, and you've seen me hatch my comics :I So here it's your call, I don't think it would be that big a deal to tone her on the last panel.
ashes2steel
December 17th, 2010
Yeah, already pointed out, the typo of "were." o3o
ashes2steel
December 17th, 2010
Lol I had to zoom out so I could see the page right, before the gradient tone just looked like a bad-res tone file XD

I think the page gets the point across, but does only that. It doesn't seem to go beyond saying "ok, here's a action scene" instead of "Dadum! Here's an ACTION scene!" Really bad way of explaining it, but that's the only metaphor I can think of XD

What I would say might help is maybe adding more of a "twist" into the girl's abdomen, maybe raise her right guarding arm to a bit higher level, maybe her like her chest, to give her more of an urgency. Unless she's not urgent, to which that would make sense. The monster looks like it's kinda calmly waiting for her - maybe raising its shoulders for a more of a "preying" look to give it that "I'mma strike!" flavor. Unless, of course, it's supposed to be looking kinda relaxed, like "I'm a monstah, you can't hurt meh so I'mma take my time~"

Like I said, I'm not as good at this stuff like you, Jorge, or Kenny, so I might be giving really bad advice D: but I hope my ramblings help >3>
ashes2steel
December 17th, 2010
Hey Scotts-meister, I know I'm a little inexperienced to give out advice or anythin', but I wanna help ya along, so I'll throw in an idea or two out there if I see anything I think is outta place or anythin'.

The thing I wanna say here is that I disagree with you on saying the plant is unimaginative. It might look kinda "blah" or something to you, but I think it goes well with what the dialogue is sayin'. The feeling is "I do so much for such a simple thing" and therefore, I think it's fitting if the rose looks "simple" and such in design. It intrigues the reader to go "Huh, she's risking life and death over this... I wonder what's so special about it? I'll keep reading to find out!" At least that's what went through my mind >3>
I must say, this is one very pretty comic. I hope that if I say "silly" you won't be offended, but it gives me a nice chuckle when i read it.

I like it a lot. :3 This is coming from someone who always irks at shojo-style and rolls his eyes at romantic mush XP
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