Comment on Kompletely Halloween of Komplete Chaos
huntsekker, 14 Oct 2005 08:49 am

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I gave you a rating of 4 for the sole reason that its not another bloody manga comic. Well done :D

Comment on "whoops..." of Geek Waste Land
huntsekker, 09 Oct 2005 03:51 am

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Critisism.

I dont know how youve drawn this, but it looks like youve done it entirely in ms paint with a mouse.

If you want it to be successful, sketch it, scan it, and ink it in photoshop. It ends up significantly cleaner and smoother, and wont make your readers eyes bleed.

Also, some rudimentary anatomy classes may help as well. Your guys look...odd, I guess would be the best word. It looks kind of like youre styling your characters off a few of the larger web comics, which is fine, but they look a somewhat deformed.

PS: Swaering does not a funny comic make. In places, it can add humour to a panel. But if you just throw it around like a frikkin chew toy, it aint funny.

Comment on Hacked intro of Hacked
huntsekker, 09 Oct 2005 03:36 am

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The game looks like a hot water bottle...

Look, I should probably say somthing to encourage you, to get you to practice and get better...

Unfortunately, this is the umpteenth rubbish comic I've had the bad fortune of looking at that has made my eyes bleed. Not funny, not even remotely well done, with a plot that looks like it was written by a monkey, and looks more like somthing youve scribbled during recess in kindy.

Seriously, try coming up with a half decent effort and posting it. Theres more than enough pieces of crap here without adding another.

Spend more than 5 minutes scribbling on a piece of paper, write up a proper script, and have a look at using some sort of graphic program to clean it up. There. A little constructive criticism.

Comment on Dodgeball of Lil' Morbid Theatre
huntsekker, 09 Oct 2005 02:28 am

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Well, Your style is eye catching, in a different way...dont see much humour in it though. Might just be me :)