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I didn't mean to just copy and paste that stabbing panel from the previous page, but I was behind and it didn't make sense to redraw something only slightly different.
There was going to be more about Evilyn and Mira and Arim as part of the wrap up, but I worried the story was going in too many directions. So I should instead focus on the most important elements, and save the next step of those stories until I could focus on them individually, or in groups if that made sense.
@JFP: Hmm, you're right. I could also just remove "secretly" from the upper bubble.

Maybe keeping it in three bubbles would make easier to digest?
Considering Annie's missed a lot, and there needs to be a wrap up, I figured I'd have a character fill in Annie and the readers at once. It was originally going to be Annie's father, but I thought Tabitha would be a lot more entertaining. After this long arc of fighting, some humor and silliness seemed useful.
Aftermath starts next page.
Originally Annie was falling over after running out of power in that last panel, but it looked confusing, like The Silver Dragon knocked her over or something.

One more page left, then the wrap up.
Not the first time being a creeper has been a problem for Connor.
The end of chapter 24. The story moves back to Pulse and the Silver Dragon next week for the conclusion, and aftermath.
...I wonder if they should be worried the inside of their mouths are purple...
Didn't get as much time to work on this today as I expected, so here's a black and white page. I'll add color on Friday or so.
Only a few pages left- back to team "b" for a few pages to wrap up their story, then back to team "a".
Sorry, only a black and white page today. Just really busy, I'll have to add color later.

EDIT: added color.
I'm sure you knew you'd see Annie in the Jungle Girl outfit again.
Maybe if they just let her use up her power, Connor will knock her out?
I experimented with that last panel and now I'm not sure it makes sense. I wanted to show The Silver Dragon teleporting from one place to another and the teleporting would be the transition between panels.
The Silver Dragon isn't the Goku of this story, don't think there aren't twists left. I'd say the biggest twists are coming.
If you remember, Evilyn's eye-blasts are uncontrollably strong when she doesn't have her visor-- and it makes everything purple. Even if it was Zoe mimicking her.
I actually almost completely changed the text in the middle of drawing the artwork. A lot of this text was going to be on the next page, but I thought it was more important to tell this first.
The start of chapter 24, "Jungle Dreams".
Last page of chapter 23. I'd mention the name of the next chapter but it gives away something important.