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Comic Practice Feedback

Postby vandabear3000 » April 24th, 2018, 9:33 am

Hello everyone! I've been trying to get back into making comics and so I made this practice page based on a concept I have. Any and all feedback are welcome, thanks! :) Image
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Re: Comic Practice Feedback

Postby eishiya » April 24th, 2018, 9:47 am

Could you please embed the image(s) here instead of making people go to your Facebook page? Facebook gets rather icky sometimes for people who aren't members.
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Re: Comic Practice Feedback

Postby authorloremipsum » May 13th, 2018, 11:49 pm

a few things.
1. this would make an excellent page to start a comic with! Lots of curiosity created just from the start, especially with the somewhat surreal art.
2. if you're going for a more realistic style, you may want to make your girl's eye a little smaller, it looks HUGE on her face.
3. dude!!!!!!!! it looks so cool!!! keep up the good work!
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Re: Comic Practice Feedback

Postby TWWK » May 14th, 2018, 10:18 pm

authorloremipsum wrote:a few things.
1. this would make an excellent page to start a comic with! Lots of curiosity created just from the start, especially with the somewhat surreal art.
2. if you're going for a more realistic style, you may want to make your girl's eye a little smaller, it looks HUGE on her face.
3. dude!!!!!!!! it looks so cool!!! keep up the good work!


I'll have to disagree with number 2.
The art says yes, I say yes, and the eyes say YES!
I think those eyes look great. Large eyelashes help the case.

It looks great, keep it up!
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Re: Comic Practice Feedback

Postby mitchellbravo » May 15th, 2018, 6:13 am

OP seems to have deleted their account, unfortunately :(

Going to lock, vandabear3000 if you come back with another account and want this thread reopened, PM any moderator and let them know.
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