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My Artwork-Critique Please?

Postby SupermarketRafflesia » November 2nd, 2018, 2:48 pm

Hello. I'm new to this site and was hoping I could get some critique on some of my recent non-comic work, as I feel I haven't been pushing myself as much in the past year or so. I mostly work with pen and ink, in addition to other materials used to apply the ink. I like to draw monsters and animals from the Cambrian period!

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I guess I just want critique on anything you see that you think could use some work, so line drawing, shading, form and all those other fundamental things.

Thanks in advance!
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Re: My Artwork-Critique Please?

Postby K-cho » November 3rd, 2018, 11:14 am

Maybe this is more like editing advice than actual drawing advice, but in the first and last pic, there is lots of white between the black background and the lines of your drawing, which looks messy. Also, the black background is much darker than your actual artwork and it's kind of jarring. How about either increasing the contrast of your art or going with a slightly lighter background color?

All those creatures look cool. :)
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Re: My Artwork-Critique Please?

Postby SupermarketRafflesia » November 5th, 2018, 3:40 pm

Yes, I see what you mean. I'll keep that in mind for future works. Thank you for the response.

Here's some more of my work, as I said, any feedback is appreciated as I want to improve.

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Thanks for looking. :)
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Re: My Artwork-Critique Please?

Postby GusCammisa » November 17th, 2018, 10:37 pm

As a fellow monster lover myself, I like what I see:
Shading is good enough.
As a whole, each image is delightfully freakish or suggestive of freakishness. Nice clash of expectations, cute and grotesque--push this way more.
Intentionally or not, your texturing and shading evokes a 12th century wood carving look, which is a rare and valuable thing. Well done, man.

But on to the critique:

Unless you are aggressively pursuing body horror--which is a fantastic goal--your creatures here are too formless. It is difficult for me to infer a solid structure, particularly on the fox and what I assume is a skull-headed guy riding a prehistoric crustacean. This probably comes down to line weight. I have trouble myself with this, but I know that varying your line weight (thicker lines for what is closer to the viewer, thinner for those further away, thicker lines on the outline, thinner lines for details inside the outline, etc) is incredibly useful for conveying form.

There is a stiffness to all of these images that stunts the organic horror you're going for. Work on flow. Aggressively use references of real animal musculature to get some crazy poses going. Stretch, pull, twist, all that good stuff. Get some bold action poses going. if you haven't seen The Thing (1982) then do yourself a huge favor and watch it. You are directly or indirectly channeling Thing-ness here. That's fantastic.

You should be excited. This is a rare style in an era where anime/furry media dominates a lot of the internet. You should bulk up on anatomy studies and references. You will be stunned to see how monstrous these things can be when they have accurate anatomy pushing the hideousness. Nice job, man, keep going. I'm excited myself to see where you take this.
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Re: My Artwork-Critique Please?

Postby SupermarketRafflesia » July 23rd, 2019, 3:09 pm

Thanks a lot for the response, and sorry for such a late reply. I have since tried to take on board what you and some others have said, but whether there's any improvement is another thing.

Anyway, here's some more recent stuff:

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Re: My Artwork-Critique Please?

Postby SupermarketRafflesia » July 27th, 2019, 2:59 pm

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Here's another recent piece. I like this one, so I need some critique to tell me why I shouldn't lol.
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Re: My Artwork-Critique Please?

Postby SupermarketRafflesia » August 1st, 2019, 2:32 pm

I'm proud of this piece I've just finished, for once.

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Re: My Artwork-Critique Please?

Postby Socratatus » August 12th, 2019, 5:09 pm

This is to me is a rather scary style. That don`t make it bad. I wish I could come up with images like that, but I`d probably scare myself. Kinda reminds me of Salvador Dali`s work. You should check him up!


As for critique, it`s kind of hard to say since the images are so weird to me. Perhaps just work on keeping the forms more `solid`, put more certainty into you lines perhaps, And be definite on where your light source or sources are coming from so everything lights up where its light and dark where it`s dark. Make tubular things like the tentacles have a curved cross hatching shading to really bring up the shape. For example look at something tubular for real against light like a banana or rolling pin and see how the light goes round it then the shadow takes over to give it form that stands out. Add a place where they are, like ground, don`t have them in nowhere.

That will give it a more `real` look. It`s good though.
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