Request for review: Void

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Request for review: Void

Postby Bloomer » November 2nd, 2017, 7:09 pm

Hey y'all! Chapter 2 of my comic, 'Void: The Guide to a Healthy Relationship', has recently been closed and I was hoping to get some feedback. Do not be afraid to be painfully honest, I'm aware my comic is just a bunch of drawings, and have no qualms about it being torn apart.

What I'm asking for:
- General critique and/or review on my comic if you so choose.
- Feedback on any of the following: Characters, story, visuals, and/or pacing.

A few things you can still point out that I'm aware of:
- My lettering is awful. (I've changed things a bit in recent pages, but feel free to let me know if the bubbles are still illegible)
- Overly cluttered environments.
- Characters/foregrounds melting into the backgrounds.

A few things you should know:
- Chapter 1 has full nudity between pg. 15-20.
- There is cussing throughout the comic.
- The word 'tranny' is used on pg. 30 of chapter 2.

Thank you so much for your time!

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