Fates(desperate need of review)

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Fates(desperate need of review)

Postby kames sakazuki » February 19th, 2018, 6:30 pm

Hello, I would like to have a critic on my story telling and art.
How well is the story and characters written, how good is the art, what can I improve on?
It is a oneshot with 60 pages. It is a martial arts heavily shonen influenced story.
Here's the link http://fates.smackjeeves.com/comics/2503099/page0/
Thanks in advance.
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