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Something you dislike about the above SJer's comic

PostPosted: August 28th, 2011, 9:04 pm
by blankd
Like the title says~

No webomic is perfect after all. Feel free to express what you think is one (or some!) of the aspects of the webcomic that make you dislike it, bonus points if you can name what you dislike and give suggestions on how that comic can fix or improve that aspect! Just remember to keep it civil 8)

Don't forget to point to a URL of your comic (or put it in your post). If you don't have a comic, fret not, just be sure to provide a link to ANOTHER comic to be looked at. :)

(Edited/Opted out for initial dislike since it's unsolicited.)





Check Sig for comic. Warning: It's a bit graphic.

Re: Something you dislike about the above SJer's comic

PostPosted: August 29th, 2011, 5:49 pm
by Guest
I don't like the fact that I can't dislike something from your comic.

Re: Something you dislike about the above SJer's comic

PostPosted: August 29th, 2011, 6:59 pm
by Advertisement
Its a cheap stickman comic.

Re: Something you dislike about the above SJer's comic

PostPosted: August 29th, 2011, 7:06 pm
by Sonic-ock
The first Joke in the comic is a furry joke and there's real context for it, Megaman just kinda says furries. meh.

otherwise I like it, the sprites are larger than regular megaman sprites without that terrible xoomed in sprite effect. good job!

Re: Something you dislike about the above SJer's comic

PostPosted: August 29th, 2011, 7:14 pm
by T1p2
I dislike that the banner in your sig doesn't lead to the comic. :p (does that count? if not then I also dislike that you only have 1 page up so far. ^^;)

Re: Something you dislike about the above SJer's comic

PostPosted: August 29th, 2011, 7:23 pm
by eishiya
I don't like the art. It's made out of basic shapes (and limited to 2 angles, front and profile*) and has no real character to it. The art does its basic job of showing the reader what's going on and who is saying what, but it does nothing to enhance the action/jokes.

* Edit: And back, I guess that counts.

Re: Something you dislike about the above SJer's comic

PostPosted: August 29th, 2011, 7:50 pm
by Asj
I don't like the next/prev arrows. and... hmm... their noses don't look small enough sometimes, since I'm used to anime.
(see sig)

Re: Something you dislike about the above SJer's comic

PostPosted: August 29th, 2011, 7:54 pm
by Sonic-ock
Their noses are too small, as I'm used to tengu.

Re: Something you dislike about the above SJer's comic

PostPosted: August 29th, 2011, 8:00 pm
by Asj
There's too much seducing women in your comic for my tastes. Besides that, it sounds interesting.
(sig)

Re: Something you dislike about the above SJer's comic

PostPosted: August 29th, 2011, 8:03 pm
by eishiya
I don't like that it uses Comic Sans. It doesn't look terrible and completely out of place (so it just looks plain blah), but I'm sure there are much better options.

Re: Something you dislike about the above SJer's comic

PostPosted: August 29th, 2011, 8:06 pm
by The_Hankerchief
It's a BL. Not that there's anything wrong with it, it's just not my thing. Other than that artwork's great!

Re: Something you dislike about the above SJer's comic

PostPosted: August 29th, 2011, 8:12 pm
by Monkipi
I dislike how large it is. It makes it somewhat difficult to read and follow visually.

Re: Something you dislike about the above SJer's comic

PostPosted: August 29th, 2011, 8:17 pm
by Ddraigeneth
Hank - For the pages with digital colouring, he could benefit a lot from some basic tutorials. A few simple steps can go a long way to cleaning up rough edges.

Monkipi - The banner is very stretched/squished. I would've said the art needed some general cleaning up, but the more recent pages are actually looking pretty decent.

Re: Something you dislike about the above SJer's comic

PostPosted: August 29th, 2011, 8:28 pm
by Guest
I don't like that I didn't get some of the jokes. Other than that, nada (I looked at Penny Thoughts).

Re: Something you dislike about the above SJer's comic

PostPosted: August 29th, 2011, 8:32 pm
by The_Hankerchief
Ddraigeneth wrote:Hank - For the pages with digital colouring, he could benefit a lot from some basic tutorials. A few simple steps can go a long way to cleaning up rough edges.


Yeah, I suppose I ought to go through one of those, shouldn't I? I've noticed it too; when I look at my colors vs. others, mine looks almost third grade-esque. That and I oughta get a new editing program; Macromedia Fireworks MX has been good, but it's old. (2004 old.) O.o

That, and I haven;t seen an update for If Angels Prevailed for awhile. Frowny face, in text.