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Re: Something you like about the above SJver's comic

Postby ServerPanda » August 16th, 2015, 7:31 am

There's some pretty obvious progression going on with the art here. That's super awesome!
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Re: Something you like about the above SJver's comic

Postby Seven Rain » August 16th, 2015, 1:00 pm

You do a killer job with the cyrberpunk/sci-fi look, and I can already tell Atlas is gonna be a rad dude!
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Re: Something you like about the above SJver's comic

Postby Candralar » August 22nd, 2015, 11:14 pm

Alright...it took me a few days, but I've read through Wings of Ethereal and you having done so many pages of the comic is quite an accomplishment. I think the whole idea of having a kingdom that doesn't just border Adamantia but is actually above it is a great concept. It reminds me a little bit of the movie Upside Down although the stories aren't anything alike.

I like how the knights are able to manifest advanced powers. I think the character Rev is pretty cool, and I think his battle with the knights was my favorite part of the comic so far.
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Re: Something you like about the above SJver's comic

Postby arnisd » August 31st, 2015, 12:45 pm

I like the setting and the story so far, the art style is also very nice (give the people who draw it a cookie)
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Re: Something you like about the above SJver's comic

Postby maelstrom51210 » September 18th, 2015, 12:31 pm

That beginning with the first person perspective was a very good way of drawing the reader in.
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Re: Something you like about the above SJver's comic

Postby mikemacdee » September 20th, 2015, 7:13 am

The banner is pretty clickable, what with its sharp, dynamic angles and its minimalist colorscheme.
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Re: Something you like about the above SJver's comic

Postby ServerPanda » September 20th, 2015, 2:49 pm

Your expressions. Darn those are awesome! And your inking is pretty sweet too!
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Re: Something you like about the above SJver's comic

Postby walkin_talkin_apocolyps » October 21st, 2015, 11:52 am

woah ok it was pretty easy findin cool things about yur comic. so im gunna go with how much i like the designs of things. backrounds and people and airships. all pretty rad
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Re: Something you like about the above SJver's comic

Postby Squirreltastic-Blue » May 16th, 2016, 10:37 am

Your backgrounds are fantastic. They're not too distracting or overly detailed, and are even changed with colored lighting from things like blue lightning.
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Re: Something you like about the above SJver's comic

Postby Supahsnail » July 1st, 2016, 10:17 am

So, squirrel gastric has two webcomics in his signature and I chose Nick Polar Bear because polar bears are f*cking awesome.

Right off the bat, I can say it belongs to the broad category of cartoon art that I like the best with thick likes, harder shading and smooth features instead of a more realistic style. Cartoonists that draw closer to life are impressive, but it always falls into the uncanny valley for me. I like my comic characters to have disproportionally big heads damn it!

(Also, the girl on the May 4th page really reminds me of Koto from season two of Yu Yu Hakusho and that makes me very happy. I also love the crazy eyelashes on her character design.)
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Re: Something you like about the above SJver's comic

Postby akemikae » August 28th, 2016, 3:44 am

@Supahsnail

So this SJver's comic is using lego's, rather than drawings to make her comic. I find it really creative actually, and a great way to use your resources. The thing I liked the most about the comic that I read of it, was the sense of humor. It was actually rather clever, and well thought out a lot of the time. I'm also a big fan of using limited panels on each page!

(Also, I apologize to whomever is below me, I don't have any actual comic pages done, just character sources. Haha. It's still incredibly new!)
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Re: Something you like about the above SJver's comic

Postby BonesMcKay » November 21st, 2016, 12:58 pm

You're good at picking colours for your character designs.
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Re: Something you like about the above SJver's comic

Postby JoKeR » November 21st, 2016, 4:49 pm

ZOLTAAAR!!

But to be more serious, it's very cool to see how your comics have improved. I like them both but Sovereign is my favourite because of the cast. Somehow awkward but somehow plausible in it's own world. :mrgreen:
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Re: Something you like about the above SJver's comic

Postby BonesMcKay » November 22nd, 2016, 3:07 pm

:) I love all your improvements too. Also the puns made me laugh harder than I'd like to admit.

It's crazy how much you can improve over time.
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Re: Something you like about the above SJver's comic

Postby martina313 » November 22nd, 2016, 4:07 pm

Sovereign has some really vivid colouring,Something I've always adored in most comics. It makes the setting seem so alive
(Plus I REALLY like the expressions!!)
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